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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Dame Niamh
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The pacing is perfect; you\'re drawing us along into the tale, just waiting to see what\'s going to happen next! More, please!
Blessed be,
Dame Niamh
person Brian
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No I will never learn patience. SO HURRY UP!!!!
person EVegvary
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness - you have just hit your stride with this third chapter! YES! Very, very nicely done.

You HAVE hooked me and I will eagerly await your updates!
person Katty
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story and I hope you keep updating
person Nocturnus
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really update soon!

Teen age hormone, I have forgoten about that little problem, it would be fun.
person Droxy
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I love the set up in this chapter. Can\'t wait until the next one.
SS getting hugged- too funny.
person Stellar Snape
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thank you for updating so quickly! This chapter was very nice. I love how Hermione is really noticing things about Snape that nobody else is. That is definitely something that she would do. I look forward to the next chapter! Keep it up!
person JennyLynn
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ya, the wacky body exchange has finally happened! Brilliant idea by the way, and so far very nicely written. You have Snape nicely in character, different body regardless, hehe.

Update soon! Or ill sent you an owl and make you have to switch into Pansy\'s body....oh the horror....
person Droxy
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shame on you for berating yourself. Everyone thinks Pawn to Queen is great, and it is well written but frankly SubRosa was more enjoyable and I agree with your version of Snape. Never underestimate the taste of your readers. Steven King laughs all the way to the bank. Romance encompasses a wide variety of story types, and I\'m sure yours would be as good as those other stories you are in awe of, becausue my dear Quark- many writers are in awe of YOU.

The Snape in this story is very canon so far, and very excellent. You could do an SS/HG, and I think it would be brilliant. I\'d love to see your take on the marriage law challenge.( hint hint)

However, I am really looking forrward to this story already. The first chapter is such a riot with Snapes view of the Dursleys.

I always find your POVs to be outstanding and the dialog to be highly entertaining.

I will be tracking this story.

person Talene
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks to be wonderfully interesting. I hope you continue with it and update soon.