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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant, I absolutely love this story so far.
keep up the great work.
keep up the great work.
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Love the punch. Draco had had it coming. More soon please.
J
J
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! Bravo Snarry!!! And the sexual tension is so thick you could cut it with a knife. Waiting with bated breath for more. So loving this story!!!
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! This story is proving to be very interesting. You have done an outstanding job in putting Snape\'s personality in Harry and having him struggle to hide it. Very excited to see this progress!
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You seem to have something about writing very interesting Rons...
Good chapter.
Helen(didn\'t get any better. Almost got taken to a hospital but the temperature went down luckily)
Good chapter.
Helen(didn\'t get any better. Almost got taken to a hospital but the temperature went down luckily)
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this very much. I like that Ron and Hermione call rll right off that something\'s wrong with Harry, and are coming up with their own hypotheses about it. I also like that Snape seems to be pretty rotten at pretending to be Harry. It seems very plausible that his \"Harry\'s-eye-view\" permits him to see Hermione differently--much more intely,ely, in her common room and on her own time rather than in class. I wonder what other perceptions will be different.
Thanks for the story, please update soon!
Thanks for the story, please update soon!
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ron figured it out. Well, most of it.
Your insight on his character was bang on (is that an actual expression or did I just come up with it). Ron does sell himself far too short IMHO.
More please Barrie!
Your insight on his character was bang on (is that an actual expression or did I just come up with it). Ron does sell himself far too short IMHO.
More please Barrie!
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another couple of great chapters! I can\'t wait to see if Hermione actually gets to know the truth, or if shels fls for \'Harry\'. Now wouldn\'t that just put Severus\' knickers in a wad? Not knowing if Hermione were really into him or Harry? LOL! I love to see Snape rattled.
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'m really liking this story, its very very good, and i hope u cont. writing it:)
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are always so good at moving a story along slowly, just the right pace... I love the conversation Snarry had with Hermione about the potions books... This is awesome!!! I can\'t wait for more!!! Still waiting for the Snarry/Draco stand off...!