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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person jeanette
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And now it\'s time to say good bye to our favorite read
T-E-R R-I-B-L-E Temp-ta-tion

What a fic, yes it was

Yes I love this fic so much
I saved it to my drive

So I can read again (and again my friend)

Freindly Quark, she so great wish I had an once of that talent in my hands.

Love Jeanette
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Harry ended up with Luna and Ginny with Neville. Makes sense. Somewhat. Glad to see Lavender and Ron together.
Oh how I love happy endings. Thanks so much for writing this Barrie. I am sorry to see it finished though. (I feel a letdown when I finish a good book too.)
It was truly a wonderous story.
Cheers!
PS I hope you break the 1000 mark on reviews. Wouldn\'t that be something!
person dryade
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! what a great story! what a happy ending! i loved it!!! i\'m looking forward to see what you\'ll be doing next.
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah !! I think I\'m the 1000th review !!

I can\'t believe it\'s over. It has been sa fua fun ride. This is a story I hope I can find the time to read again. I have not even looked at any other stories in this challange because, let\'s face it, who could do better than this ?

Thanks and I will be waiting for the next adventure,

Glinda
person Deeble
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s just the perfect ending to an already wonderful story. Such complete happiness, tempered by the demands of the kids for a dash of everyday reality (though in end end that\'s clearly part of their happiness, despite their amusing banter to the contrary). The garden/beautiful day repetition supports the feeling of unalloyed joy so well.

It\'s got to be tough to make a story starring Snape sweet without being sappy, to move him from bad-tempered snarkiness to good-tempered snarkiness and make it seem completely natural, and to keep everyone else in character too. Good thing you\'re up to the challenge.

I\'d be sad this is done except the finale feels so right ... and I suppose those several other stories you\'re working on should soften the blow. ;-)
person ancientgirl
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this last chapter. My favorite part was the dream Hermione had with the two kids and then Severus calling her bossy boots later. That was very cute.
person IrishRavenX
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Happy endings make me so...happy (so happy that my vocabulary fails me). I\'ve really enjoyed this story, and I think I\'ll go and read it over again. It\'s always a joy to read your stories, thanks for sharing!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 44... THANK YOU so much for sharing this WONDERFUL story!!! I have thoroughly enjoyed it, from beginning to end!!! Deb >^..^<
person scifichick774
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can\'t believe this fic is finally done. It was truly amazing. Well done.
person Susan
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* It really is over? I loved this story. The epilogue was a really nice touch. I am such a sucker for happy endings. Can I bug you now for a new story? LOL. Thank you for a fantastic gift. This was truly a pleasure to read. Hugs, Susan :-)