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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Guest
schedule August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Goodness. I am loving this story! I thought I had read every twist on the HG/SS pairing but this has to be one of the cleverest and most well-written that I've ever had the pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters and already dreading the end of the story. Thank you thank you thank you!!
person Alikat
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved that you had Severus as in character as you could but that you also made him human. I agree that after the life he had lived he would be a bit insecure with that relationship but that he is passionate and loving enough to see it through. I loved the way you did the epilogue. You touched on every aspect and closed out the story but you also made it seem like we had stepped back in the pensieve of Severus and Hermione's lives. Well done! Thank you for sharing your talents, Kudos and God bless!
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story, but the typos and spelling errors were extremely distracting.
person Meg
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is one by far one of the best I've come across. You put so much thought into the mind's of each character, no matter the importance. You know, I've never liked Ron's character outside of the orignal books, but your story really pulls out his best traits, without being totally out of character. Congrats.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely story!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lisa
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was wonderful...very addicting... though I must say I was disapointed to not see how the cat clan either helped out in the final battle OR reacted to Hermione, Severus and Minerva after the final battle... Oh well guess you can't get everything you wish for... the story was great!!!

Keep Writing!!

Lisa
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uhh this is so cute!! I love it! ^^
person *DB*
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome story i loved it
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?