rate_review Reviews

i just wanted to say that this is one of the most engaging, intelligent stories i\'ve read on this site. i\'m normally too lazy to actually stop and review something i\'ve read, but i thought this deserved it. just as a small hint--it woue nie nice if you kept writing.

beach,
i am so sorry about wat happened to your story on ff.net. I am not going to blame anyone but I was really mad, too. I absolutely love your story (still). You are an awesome writer, and I have read every single one of your stories. I posted a fanfiction on ff.net and it would mean so much to me if you would read it. My penname is Saria65 and the story is called Hello. You are an inspiration to me and I love you. Keep writing your wonderful stories and I will keep reading. Ta.
Kaylie

.............WOW. Talk about stunning writting. It\'s just... *shakes head* Perfect. It\'s just perfect. *shakes head in awe*

Hey beachLEMON, i just wanted to ask that if these chapters go along with the ones from ff.net or if u changed them a bit. cuz now i dont know where i was up to...lol i know in ff.net i was up to chapter 18 havent read it yet but now i dont know if ur chapters run differently here i know i read the double helix spiral down chapter not sure about the next one tho. is taht all u had before??

oh my! Several chapters to read for me today. : )

It reads kind of like a dream. You know, kind of detached and through a haze almost. I hope that was the effect you were going for, sort a surreal quality to it. Through part of this I just wanted to reach through the screen and strangle pansy. lol

I do hope Hermione manages to come out of the . . . fog that seems to be enveloping her.

I like your Draco. A middle of the line, snark present and accounted for, Draco that is entirely believable.

Kiri

HEy im Denisse, i was reading this ff of urs in ff.net and u were father than this and i got an email that u had updated but i check and u took off this ff from there and i was wondering if u could email me the part that was chapter 18 and after that in fanfiction.net Well thanks. By the WAy this is a great ff keep it up!

Hey! it really sucks that your story was taken out of FF.net. it was (and still is) my favorite Hr/D story. Keep on writing and i\'ll just wair yor you to post all the chapters! Good Luck and.......Great Story!:)

Hey beachLEMON,

I started reading this fic while it was posted on ff.net, and I must say I LOVE IT! I just cant believe those bastards did that to you, and so many other great authors. Keep posting more, I love this fic... I\'ve never seen Cruel Intentions, and I just love how you have this so close to that. Can\'t wait for a new post! My IM s/n is ShawnsBabydoll36, you\'ve talked to me before. If you ever wanna talk about your ff, like if you need help or any ideas, lemme know;-). Til you post again. Adieu!

A big fan,
Tatia

I love it. i had to muffle my chuckles so as to not wake the house. I look forward to the next installment.

AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!! How sweeeet.... Hehe, I do belive you have addicted me. Tis such a fun plot!! And Alfy is adorable!! And Mya is just perfect for him. ^_^ I think I\'ll stick around. The depth you portray is quite astounding and uncommen - although in no way undesired. I just might suggest this\'n to others when their writing trickles off and *DIES*.... Hmm... Actually that\'s noth a h a bad idea....