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October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wish there was more to this story. I really like it.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so good! I loved how you fit in their love in with the fourth book!! Please write the next chapter soon please!!! ^_~
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you forr rer reviews, and hopefully I have corrected those mistakes. I\'m so glad you guys like my story. Sorry to say, but updates might not be coming until the end of January. Two weeks of endless work and studying are coming up. *pouts. And this was my favorite story too. Arigato gozeimase! Jya ne!
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
meh, i like the story but thw writing is a bit lacking, seems a bit too childish, but it\'s hard to write about a shoping spree without that happening, so i forgive you. The earing thing, though extreamly ignorant is correct. It wasn\'t started by gay people it was started by homophobs so they could make fun of guys with earings, then when they realized, hey that looks good, lets just say that if your right ear is pierced, then you\'re a homo. I\'m not personally offended by stuff like that, but it still sounds ignorant to hear people say it. Also you have the time periods mixed up, at 17 the year should be about 1998, 1999 not even close to 2004 (your last samurai reference). Now jus just nit picking so i\'ll stop.
Again the story is good, but the writing just sounded kinda goofy, buying \"docs\" and \"tims\" he\'s english not from chelsea, mass. but your story your call, just some constructive critisism ^.^
Again the story is good, but the writing just sounded kinda goofy, buying \"docs\" and \"tims\" he\'s english not from chelsea, mass. but your story your call, just some constructive critisism ^.^