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for Toxic Time

by beachLEMON

person Tatia
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!! This fic was totally confusing, yet interesting at the same time. A question that has been bugging me since I read the chapter: Who\'s lap is Hermione sitting on?!?! Haha... I\'m like totally wacked out right now, at first I thought it could be Draco... but he\'s the one on the bar stool, so it\'s not him. Or maybe it could be Harry or Ron... I hope you will clear that up in the next chapter. Great Chapter beachLEMON! Post soon!
person Mel
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods that was soo freakin\' sad... I\'m sobbing... How could she do that??? How *COULD* she break his heart so much?? I am going to go rock myself - I hurt. She can\'t. He couldn\'t. Shouldn\'t. I hate Ron. I honestly completely hhim.him. How could she???
person The Devil
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your plot is depressing but you write very well!
It breaks me heart when my fave couple aren
person Apollonia
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesomw. I would like to see Hermione see the error of her ways and fall into his arms. Please update soon!
person jkrazed
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, to say the leasWillWill there be more? Perhaps from Hermione next? If so, I\'ll be sure to read!
person elementaldeity
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was soulful and deep, the angst of it all, the wanting and needing and not having. Very good. Will there be more or was this more of a one shot deal?