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for Valentine Devilry

by iamlikethis

person Alisha
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I love it! Please continue. Severus Snape always to to make an entrance doesn\'t he? ;) *swoons*
person XxphoenixX
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha. I love bitchy, anti-love Hermione - we all know she\'s just bitter. She reminds me of someone... hold on... I know it\'s someone I know... oh yeah! Me!
The last part with the description of kissing and Snape\'s response is just hilarious. It\'s really fantastic, so keep wri and and update soon, will ya? I\'ve read like five first chapters of these BahHumBug challenge fics but not a single one has been updated since...
person nesscafe
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! A pair of dark eyes! Yum yum! That can only be Snape! Who else would take 100 points for smooching! I can\'t wait to see what happens next! More please! More! I love this! Such a wonderful start! Will it be all Hermione\'s view! Oh I can\'t wait!
person Harma
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story! Please continue!!
person jkrazed
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the e-mail! And good start! But speaking as someone who married a man who doesn\'t like PDA\'s, that\'s thrown out of the window when the right person comes along. Looking forward to Hermione throwing it away for Severus!