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for Valentine Devilry

by iamlikethis

person MoD
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwe see that \'s cold. Chapter 5 just left it hng wng wide open. Man!
person nesscafe
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! You tease! We were supposed to find out what he\'s up to in this chapter! *makes pouty face* More please!
person Alisha
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I love the Sneaky Snarky Snape......*swoons*
person spaz141
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting in a fast paced kinda way. Thanks.
person Alisha
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! No Cliffie! Sohara! My my, Severus Snape istingting sneaker and should I say sexier by the minute. ;) I love the more impulsive Snape...lets see what his preposition is. Can\'t wait till next chapter.
person Miki
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love that Hermione is not suddenly transformed, and has matured realistically. Snape\'s sudden interest is well timed. I\'m glad that Harry and Ron are just as cluesless as before, and like many teenage boys. I wouldn\'t want Snape to bppy.ppy. Sarcasm is more than just his forte, it\'s his calling card in a sense. Great writing!! Can\'t wait for subsequent chapters...please, continue.
person nesscafe
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"St. Mungo
person GeekGoddess
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is getting good....I love it....I can\'t wait to see what kind of mischief Hermione and Snape can cause
person Temptation
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Why do I have this really sneaky feeling that Snape & Hermione are going to cause major shock waves in the student populace (especially her 2 best friends & their girlfriends) for the dance? I really hope the four get put in their place righoperoperly.
Anyway - keep up the good work!!
person Fish
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... intriguing. I WANT MORE!
\"Care for a drink, Miss Granger?\" -- possibility of a drunken pair... ahemming... for lack of a better description.
Hmm... as I said before - Am INTRIGUED!
More soon, please! This is great!

Ciao,
Fish