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oh god!! that was fantastic!

lol

Nice one!

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Oh you evil w! Ho! How could you leave it there!
More please...write fast!!! MMM, Snape...nuf said!

thanks.

you have a good premise here but i\'m not so sure you\'re handling it all that well. the idea of lavender and snape is good, but when the girls first found out it was snape they were horrified and disgusted. from what i read of your story, i don\'t see that changing but there they all are getting excited. teenage girls i guess, i just don\'t understand them. lol. anyway, it seemed to me that snape was very easy to seduce. with the self control he needs to spy on voldemort and everything, i just can\'t believe a flash of pussy would affect him that much. your writing style is good, but again i just don\'t feel the characters are believable or thought out so well. from how lavender\'s story is going, it sounds to me like it should be hermione\'s. from the books, lavender is a giggly little air head. she of course can have a crush on snape, but just the way they are talking i don\'t see any differentiation of characters. a little development of their personalities is needed i think.

like, omg, thats too good. I myself am not a big fan of snape, so you really must be good, as I was alomst changing my mind...until you stopped lol. SO KEEP GOIN
Nikee the Lady of the Wood
(pename on ff.net=I love elves)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, I want MORE!!! Don\'t stop now!!
Can\'t wait to read more of the other girl\'s stories, more please

this is FANTASTIC
its great! keep the chapters coming in
:-D cant wait for the next one

Ravn xxx