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for Dance With Me

by Slashychick84

person Heather
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What in the world could that spell be??? I have to admit, I enjoy fluffy fics every now and then, and this is satisfying that hunger. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!

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person Alisha
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It just keeps getting better, I love it...Aww..you should have let Ron lunge...it\'d be fun to see his butt get kicked....but annyway, Please continute. It\'s going along beautifully, and I have to say, I love the sneaky version of Hermione.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOl ::giggling hysterically:: This is great! I can just picture the entire scene. : )~ Now, what\'s that old saying. . . ? Hmmm, \"oh, what a tangled web we weave.. :: ::smirks::

Can\'t wait for more.


Kiri
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one. Gonna add more soon? Please??
person ancientgirl
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very romantic so far. I love their little plotting together and trying to shock everyone. I\'m lookinf forward to more.
person Droxy
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This isn\'t bad for a first fic. It\'s very entertaining.

The pacing is rather quick, but that\'s depnt ont on how long this story is.
person GeekGoddess
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it.....I always thought that book Snape and book Hermione would eventually come to some sort of relationship whether it be partners in crime or friendship.....this is interesting....I wonder what the smoke is.
person Lily
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello, i\'ve never reviewed before but i think this is a good story especially for a first time fic. i like your portrayal of both hermione and snape, i hope you continue this fic. it\'s cute!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really do like how you have started your story & am looking forward to chapter 2!!! I can\'t wait to see how everyone reacts to this \"odd\" couple, faces being made, whispers & comments, should prove quite interesting!!! I think you gave them a nice opening to what could become something so much more than just a dance or two!!! Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks.