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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you add some milk and stir gently, your plot won\'t tend to thinken quite as much. ;p Seriously, this is quite good, and laugh out loud funny, you should be pleased.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wahhahahahahahA!!
ahhahaha... get it!.... double entendre...
whee. I\'m nothing like sated, but you seem to have a delicious predilection for subtleties in your writing that quite excites me. More, please!
~ Jenna.
ahhahaha... get it!.... double entendre...
whee. I\'m nothing like sated, but you seem to have a delicious predilection for subtleties in your writing that quite excites me. More, please!
~ Jenna.
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 5 & 6... HOLY MY!!! Chapter 5 was a FABULOUS lead in to what was to come in chapter 6!!! You did an IDIBLDIBLE job of writing this chapter!!! I really like the fact that he cares for her enough to let her know that he will stop if she wants!!! I can\'t wait to see what she does to get her next detention;-) Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm yummy chapter. I liked when Severus leaned over and let her know he was trying to play a game with her, very sweet.
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cool! Am a bit worried about your plot thickening so much, maybe you should stir it a bit??? Wouldn\'t want it to congeal now would we??? Write more soon!
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Busted! Trying to sneek in thinking Harry & Ron wouldn\'t be there to interogate her. Tisk tisk! I thought that was a sweet chapter! Loved it and look forward to more!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4.... I really like the comment Hermione made: