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for Forgiven

by carriedemarchi

person somekindofberry
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An unexpectedly abrupt end. Hmph.
person moi
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so good! the blood and... other stuff... was icky though. but i love the last part, when harry and draco\'s mum come. it was excellently written. well done. you should continue in a sequel. i\'d love to see what happens next.
~moi
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic! I loved the part where Draco killed Lucius using the older man\'s own blade.
The only things I would have changed were 1) explained about Narcissa more and 2)
told a little more about Harry and Draco after Draco killed his father.

Don\'t get me wrong. I thought the fic was really good. I was just left a bit wanting at the
end. Maybe you could write a follow-up fic... or something. :)