AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for An Inspired Idea

by tny1111

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person betty
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"So is sperm, but I don\'t give blowjobs for breakfast.\" Brilliant!
person Moi
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess this is abandoned. What a shame. Excellent little story; I was laughing out loud over the breakfast discussion, and then the charmed goblet--excellent! And the bit about the war going differently if she had been on the Dark Lord\'s side.... brilliant.
person Kiristeen
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOLOL I Love it! With that parting shot of Hermione\'s, she *earned* those lost points. ::snicker::

You\'re so wicked! I love that in an author. Hope for more soon.


Kiri
person nesscafe
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ho ho ho! She really is a saucy wench! LOL! Poor horny Snape! I wonder what Hermione was really thinking about that problem that keeps popping up! *snigger*
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4.... What a FABULOUS chapter!!! Severus has no real idea just who he has partnered himself with!!! You added just the right amount of humor to give this chapter a perfect balance!!! The \"nice ass\" & \"you might want to use this time to handle that problem that keeps popping up\" were PERFECT!!!

Can\'t wait to see hheirheir plans (& his desires) progress!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
person Stellar Snape
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m currently in the throes of an all-out hysterical fitou aou are a genius! Your grasp of comedic timing is perfect! LOVE THIS STORY! Keep up the fantastic work!
person Merrideth
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just bloody brilliant. I absolutely love what you\'ve done to Hermione. And Snape getting a hard-on every 10 minutes is only helping the image. I can\'t wait for more. Please update soon.
Merrideth
person WendyNat
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK - I\'ve got to get to work so I\'m rushed, but I couldn\'t help but review - this is one of the funniest lines I\'ve read in a long time: \"So is sperm, but I don\'t give blow jobs for breakfast.\" HEEHEE!

I like thi this story is going - please update again soon!
person Kait
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic!!! PLease update soon - blessings, Kait x