rate_review Reviews

A few things first... I never even considered this pairing a legitimate pairing, until I stumbled across this story. Thank you for writing a summary that peaked my interest, in the first place. Also, it took me days to read through your story, darling, so if you think about quiting I'll come after you with the fury of hell to back me. Okay, now for the praise. This story is wonderful and you should be proud of yourself for writing it. I'd ask if I could marry you, if I was any more unhinged than I am. You're brilliant. Kudos and continue.

~*GypsyQueen*~

I love your story.
I came across it last month and finally finished it today.
(yeah for me)
Any way i hope you don't take to long updating this wonderfull fic.
I'll send another review a little later and it'll be long.
My mom want's to use the computer now so I have to go

But please please up date soon!!!
Much luv
Raiven

Hi, I've actually been passing up your story for a while, it just didn't seem too intresting from the summary, but i'm so happy I broke down and read it, it is wonderful! It's put together in a ver tasteful way, you have very good grammer and spng, ng, and the story has been well thought out. I hope to see more of it soon.

Arrgh this whole thing is too good to be true... Finally an update! Keep going!
I wish I had something more interesting to add, like constructive criticism or something, but... I don't... -sob- It's too close to perfect.

More more more....omg it's so funny about remus and the 'service' hehehe
kee the the good work!

I am finally getting back into this series after taking a bit of a break from fan fiction. I am so glad that I did. This story continues to impress me. The thoroughness of your writing is amazing. The way you write makes it seem impossible that the story will ever end. Each chapter, one problem is resolved an anotheergeerges. It makes the story facinating and, though long, not at all tedious, since the plot continues to advance. While I am sure that is your intention, I just wanted to point out that it is appreicated.

I love that, although Severus and Harry are in love and happy together, it is not all sunshine and roses. They have their troubles like any other couple would. It is so tempting, in fiction, to just write the happy ending and be done. I am glad that you are taking the time to make you work plausable. The story is as true to life as is possible, including the way the characters are written. As with the details that distinguish real life from blatant fantasy, you've preserved the characters as close to canon as possible. Harry and Severus are Harry and Severus as JKR wrote them, with the same mannerisms and personalities. It is sometimes a difficult thing to do, when it is so much easier simplydistdistort the characters to suit our purposes.

I suppose that is why you have such a remarkable work here. You have obviously put a great deal of effort into this to ensure that it does not become glaringly AU, or AR. Please, do continue writing this.

Lupusdragon/Draconawolf

*bounces happily* woot! I love this story, please hurry and write more. Will Remus frequent that bar often? *giggles*

New email, but same Mara as Gabix615. : )

Thanks for having a new chapter up! The title did give me a bit of a chuckle..."A Wolf in Wolf's Clothing", or should it have been aptly named a Wolf in Sheep's clothing. I see Severus had fun with a Remus doll, good show with putting Kieran in the floo again. I also enjoyed Hermione having a little fun with
Dudley, tipping the oaf off the sofa.

Ah, 'tis a pleasure reading this...numerous times, might I add. Grammar is not my forte, but nothing jumped out; spelling was fine and I hadn't noticed any
inconsistencies in the flow.

I am still a very faithful reader. That was funny about poor old Remus. Update soon. I hate having to wait so long for one of your chapters.

MMMMMMmmmmmm AWESOME... It's just brilliant
Already chapter 56... And each are just so long to...
whoho... it's 2.40Am so this is the only vocabulary I have
right now so you have to settle with LOVELY GREAT and pwease more...^^