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for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

by LeeLeePotter

person Batsutousai
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another loverly chappter. Fabulous.

You might want to fix the problem that this chapter got put up twice, though. Just a suggestion.

~Batsutousai
person candiedfreak
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it! I hope you write more soon. Oh and there are a few word errors through out it. They got me confused for some time. I hope it's just few mess ups and not a comp. error.

Your devoted fan
Candiedfreak
person Emily
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was very good, i can't wait to see what they found out! please continue and update soon, GOOD JOB
person Chelsea Landon
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hate you...and you better tell us what happens next, and soon! I want to know all about this whole healing thing...and when does sev learn about harry gicing 'him' a black eye? I laughed. Gotta run...need more...ta
person J.Oz
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah! Finally an update! But don't stop there, you're doing SO well. I cracked up at the image of Potter singing "I Feel Pretty" in the hospital wing. And I rather enjoyed the slow shag. Bravo. NEXT!
person Angie/Les`
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I swear. I will always love this story. You're doing a good job. Is there any end in sight? Well I better go. Update soon.
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chapter! Now I'm looking forward to reading more, please update soon. I took the liberty of introducing one of my friends to your story and now she's hooked too.....isn't it great?

I reeeeaaaally like the way you portray Snape, he seems even more human through you, keep up the great work and if at posspossible.....please hurry and update....patience is not one of my virtues if you can't tell and it's especially bad when I'm looking forward to another part of a story.....I like your story as much as I love my Manga.

Elizabeth
person shina
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading everything you have so far... really really damn good. I can't wait for more, you have done a fantastic job of creating an emotive story with twisting plot and lots of sexual action and tension. This has been a wonderful read(4 days around RL) and i eagerly await more.
person Kelei
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello! This fic is really really great! Keep up the good work! Please could you email me when you update? And update soon, please! <3 Kelei x
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You MUST continue this story posthaste! I am in love with it. I would have never found this an attractive couple, if you hadn't stepped in and mashed up my views. Now, you had better hurry and produce more or... I'll... I'll... *grabs a candy bar out out of lil' sister's stash of Halloween candy* I'll get bored and eat until I'm fat. You don't want to have that on your conscience do you? *munch munch* DO YOU?!

~*GypsyQueen*~