rate_review Reviews

this is a very good story. there is a great deal of humour which i find refreshing (considering my own story isn\'t very funny at all. sigh. lol) this being a slash fic, i wouldn\'t normally read it (not my cup of tea if you know what i mean) i don\'t even remember why i sed red reading it, but i\'m glad i did. i really like your portrayals of the chaers,ers, especially hermione (i don\'t know why she stands out. i guess i have a thing for her) and the fact that harry has such a hard time of things is also well thought out. there are so many layers. i really like everyone\'s interactions. seamus kissing harry to keep severus out of the rumour mill was awesome. i could go on and on about all the good, but i guess i should point out a bit of bad, not that theremuchmuch. spelling is a bit of a problem. just little things like writing he instead of she and little tiny mistakes of that nature. also, once, i saw a tense mistake. you jumped from past to present tense and then back again. it just confused me to no end. it might have been a thought from a character, but i\'m not sure. for things like thoughts, maybe you could use \'...\' marks. (not the ... but the \' \' ) it would differentiate thinking and speaking which use \" \" . just a thought. hehe. anyway, i am enjoying your story and look forward toe. re.

I totally enjoyed this story. I hope you complete it soon, because I am so wrapped up in the two main characters I was actually upset when I ran out of chapters to read! Well done!
ena ena Elizabeth

This is great. I love the characterizations in this fic. Very well done.


NOW GET WRITIN\'!!



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This is absolutely brilliant. Keep it up mate. Looking forward to more chapters. Hope Sev and Harry get together. Wish Sirius could come back though. Wish Harry or someone could bring him back but oh well. Hope to see more soon.

Wow! So much to say, so little space. lol I love the premise of the story. And the time the Professors spent as teens was great -- fun to read. I especially liked the question Severus kept writing down for himself. And of course the \"hidden\" stuff that Hermione and Harry talked about. :;snickers:: Ron was hilarious with his \'obliviate\' comments.

There was so much more I had fun reading, and thoroughly enjoyed, though at the moment, my mind seems to have gone blank on them. I keep seeing that 10th birthday pensieve. It says *so* much without actually putting it into words. I can\'t even begin to imagine what it would be like for Snape to view it.

I holding my breath for the next posting. (thankfully not literally. : )~ )
Kiri

Thank you, thank you!!! Bless your sweet heart for publishing your story here. I was incensed that it was taken off of ff.net, and have been trying to remember to go to your other posting sites to look for your updates but you have just made my life so much easier.

I have followed your story from the beginning, and am truly enamored by the way you have built Harry and Severus\' relationship. The finesse with which you handle the entire ensemble cast is phenomenal, including Harry\'s interactions with the other \"adults\" in his life, as well as his year mates.

I look forward to seeing your updates. I plan on treating myself to rereading the whole text as you post it!!! Thanks again.

Maggie