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it was funny pulling that prank on ron. the whole chapter as a whole was good, but there is a point you should be aware of. the whole chapter was grammatically incorrect. you switched verb tenses throughout the whole thing. the chapter started off present tense which threw me right away, but you you switched to past tense. then back. then again. it\'s an easy thing to fix. just pick one and stick to it. you should go back and change all the present tenses to past or vice verse. i do believe the rest of the story is past tense, so it would be good to keep it together. i hope to see the next chapter a little more coherent. it is a good story other than that little snaffu.

I found this story last night, when I should have been climing into bed. You definately reeled me in on this story. I was bewitched to finish reading it and nearly didn\'t get any sleep. I figurewoulwould read again today when I\'m more alert.

I wasn\'t expeg ang an update today, but am definately glad to see a new chapter up. Now I can go and read it again for the second time, except for chaps. 23 &24 ...that will be the third.

I can\'t seem to come up with anything new or interesting that the others haven\'t commented on.

LOLOL, love the effect of the \'sweet dreams\' glitter. : )~ Certainly makes sense to me. lolol


I look forward to more of this story.

Kiri

Woo Hoo, I liked the sweet dreams idea, very impressive what a little plot bunny that took. Poor Ron, and Sev making fun. Love it. I wait for your posts.

I think this is one of the best fics I\'ve read! I love the interaction between Ron and Harry, very realistic, I think. :) I hope you continue to update.

Please don\'t leave us hanging,
Lo

That was a mean place to stop Chapter 22 at!! ARGH clifhangers are just plain evil!! Please write more soon!!

oh my! Snape\'s pissed if he let that little tidbit drop. LOL But it was worth it for Albus\' reaction. ::snickers:: I just hope the old man doesn\'t react to badly. Somewhere in the middle I\'m hoping for. I can\'t wait to find out.


kiri

W Ano Another excellent chapter. Very real. My jaw dropped at Seamus\' actions! Now *there* is a true friend.


Kiri

*jaw drops* Talk about laying it down bluntly. *grins*

.:ochi:.

You\'ve just gotta continue this. This is one great story. I wish they\'d hurry up and get together. Hope Harry doesn\'t suffoo boo badly. Still wish Sirius could come back. I think Harry deserves some happiness. Keep it up.