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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, i\'m disappointed. harry didn\'t get to prove that he could heal snape like dumbledore. sigh. i was sure (still am actually) that harry will be the healer and that will draw them closer. it would make voldemort even angrier too. hehe. that\'s a pretty nasty way to punish someone. with a folder marked evidence, could a trial be far behind? hmmm curiouser and curiouser.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Please keep it up mate. I wanna see what happens to Sev\'s injury. Hope to see more Harry/Sev.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what can i say? another great chapter. not as big a scene as i thought upon finding harry\'s scars but it was a nice awkward moment nonetheless. what i liked more was hermione\'s reaction to harry\'s tale of the kiss. that was great. i like how you handle the relationship between the three amigos. the overall interaction by everyone is wonderful and hopefully i can learn something from it. i\'m curious though, since harry felt the calling to the one meeting, how come he didn\'t notice it this time? i guess it\'s harry\'s turn to take care of snape now. that should be fun.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now you\'ve really got my curiosity peeked! Excellent chapter. More very soon, I hope. : )
Kiri
Kiri
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh!! This is one of my favorite chapters. I love reading this over again. I\'m picking up on so much that I missed the first time. You do such a compelling job writing the interplay between Gwen and Harry. Harry, as well as all of your characters, have a depth that few writers are able to portray.
Can\'t wait for the next update!!
Maggie
Can\'t wait for the next update!!
Maggie
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah, here you are! I loked for your story nearly everywhere, but i\'m in no group so it was a little bit hard finding you. it\'s realy great you published here. load up the next chapters please and be fast whit it! love your story, fanficnet is bullshit for throwing you out!
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so wrapped up in this story. I can\'t wait to see what you have in store for Harry and Severus!
Looking forward to more updates! :)
Looking forward to more updates! :)
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like how you have given Harry a major, foible is all i can think of, lol. anyway, having him go to a shrink is a nice touch. it really shows him to be not perfect. we all know he\'s not, but this is just another reminder that harry is just a boy who needs help. and here\'s something that\'s bothering me. pumpkin juice. is it the drink of choice in britain or something? no orange or apple juice? i\'ve read so many stories where h or or whoever drinks pumpkin juice? what\'s up with that? lol. just a silly little thing that\'s bothering me. you have a great story here and if all i can pick apart is pumpkin juice you know you\'re doing something right. keep it up.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uh oh. another of harry\'s secrets is about to be \'outed\'. good chapter. i liked the interplay between the characters. and you\'re brewing mystery.t\'st\'s good. that little truth ball malfoy has might prove someone\'s undoing. excellent. and let me just say, wow on getting another chapter up so soon. or at least i think it\'s soon. i just read the last one i think this morning. lol. how do you write so fast?
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed the interaction between Gwen and Harry. Just normal every day stuff, but it makes it all seem more real, somehow.
::winces waiting for the explosion in the next chapter:: Poor Gwen, to have to take the brunt of Sev\'s misinformed anger.
Kiri
::winces waiting for the explosion in the next chapter:: Poor Gwen, to have to take the brunt of Sev\'s misinformed anger.
Kiri