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for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

by LeeLeePotter

person elementaldeity
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice long chapter. I\'m curious, you write really well and all, but from one writer to another, I agonize over rewrites. Do you? Just wondering because you said you have more written. Anyway, good chapter, I enjoyed it. Hermione drugged, that was funny. And Albus asking after Sev\'s ride, hehe.


elementaldeity
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee. I just love this chapter. Poor Harry!!! Sev is such a sneak! Whew! I\'ve got to go find my husband now!!

Thank you,
Maggie
person Kiristeen
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! When Sev dives in he *really* dives in!!!! LOLOL I can just imagine what poor -- enviable -- Harry was going through at that table. ::snickers::


Had a LOT of fun with so many chapters in one day. Woohoo! : )


Look forward to more, as always.
Kiri
person Filodea
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your chapters have gotten mixed up. I tried to get at the latest chapter, and got the Warding chapter. I\'m enjoying the story so far. A rather unique story line in some respects.
person Blackrose
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up mate. This is getting really good. Looking forward to more chapters. Hope to see more Harry/Snape.
person Magdelena
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Our Harry and Sev! Such clueless twits! I swear they could have Merlin himself walk in and tell them that they were soulmates, and they\'d still say...nah!...not us...we\'re not worthy! Oooh, now that\'s an idea...a crossover between Wayne\'s World and Harry Potter! (Sorry! I think I\'ve lost what\'s left of my mind. My two year old and I are both sick today, and very little sleep makes Maggie a silly girl!)

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter!

Maggie
person Blackrose
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is real good. Keep it up. Hope to see more soon.
person rubberduck
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay. how the heck did you get another chapter out so quickly? tell me your secret. i need to get mine going fast too. with that said, this was a fun chapter. did i call it, or did i call it? harry healing snape. who\'d a guessed? i liked the interplay between harry and his friends. well most of it. i\'m not really sure guys would bet on what another guy was wearing. well, i never did so that\'s my whole basis of comparison, but i lived a sheltered life. did i say that already? keep up the great work and i can\'t wait til tomorrow when you get the next chapter up. hehe.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful! : ) The whole thing from beginning to end. Love? Might that have something to do with the ability to heal? LOL I guess I\'ll find out eventually. : )~

LOVED Hermione\'s comments about kissing and telling. ::snickers::


Eager for more,
Kiri
person Blackrose
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting real good. Keep it up mate. I wanna see Severus apologise. Please put another chapter up, or more.