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MARVOLOUS story! best harry x snape series ever read! update soon. man i don\'t mind if u turn this serie into a dojinshi :P
keep up the good work and email me when u updated ty

You know, after reading the first part of this installment, I was going to berate you for the delay. Now, I find myself all aquiver. Yum!

This has been an incredible and most enjoyable fic! I love the added details you have; it shows that you\'re really comfortable with these characters. I have that same comfort with my usual characters and I can only hope to show the same confidence as you do in this genre as I do with my regular universe. You make it seem like a piece of cake!


Oh, and BTW, shame on you for waiting this long to make an update! I know how it is to keep the following happy and how RL keeps getting in the way.

Arista

This is really good. Keep it up. Hope Sev and Harry don\'t have too many more difficulties. I love this pairing. Looking forward to more.

\"I expelderamoosed you pretty fast.\" Possibly my favorite line of any fic, ever! Ooh, rereading is so much fun!


Maggie

Definitely worth the wait. : ) Two very wonderful chapters.


Kiri

interesting to say the least. the way harry and snape are growing closer and closer is nice. the visions harry keeps getting are disturbing as i suppose they\'re supposed to be. now from what i said before it won\'t be too big a surprise to learn these last two chapters were not my favourite. and it isn\'t just the sex, which from how i visualized it (big mistake on my part. lol) was just incomprehensible. you do realize you\'re writing about two men right? so how is it that when they were having sex harry\'s dick was between them? what kind of position were they in? also, something i\'ve noticed (and not just in your fic) is that when two men are involved they seem, or at least one seems, to act very feminine. mannerisms don\'t seem right and too soft. now this is not a topic i have any experience with (i just realized i sound like i\'m trying to prove my sexuality, but that\'s not the point) but from my own preconceived notions it just seems a bit off. i\'ll take harry kissing snape in this last chapter as an example. now i realize harry is smaller than snape and have to reach to kiss him, but if i was doing that i would be pulling him down to my level, not standing up on my tiptoes. it\'s just little things like that that make me not want to read about intimacy between two men. but i\'ll still keep reading. i\'m silly that way.

geez, three chapters out of nowhere. i didn\'t even see the story on the first page. sorry i\'m so late in reviewing. and since there were three chapters to read, i\'ve forgotten all the details. my mind isn\'t the quickest picker upper. but the sense of what happened remains and i like it. your story continues to amuse and captivate. i have to admit,m kim kind of glad there isn\'t any sex. i don\'t consider myself a homophobe, but two guys getting it on just doesn\'t appeal to me. what i like most about your story is the interaction of the characters. the friendships, the human interest stuff. i love how you deal with all the people and how they get along with one another. that\'s what really makes this story great. there\'s no point in saying keep up as there is still some story out there. just know that i look for more eagerly.

Another good chapter. With the way Charlie was acting, I suspect he is going to play \'big brother\' to Harry and give him a piece of his mind???

I also had to do a recheck...in Chap. 37 ...[q\\] \"She gets louder when someone in the house has a hangover. It\'s her subtle way of discouraging excessive drinking.\" Charlie shook his head as if he was still in disbelief of her actions, or that she still did that after all these years. \"Bill and me stopped cominge nie nights, once we realized what she was doing. Percy never figured it out, but then he hardly ever partied like the rest of us.\" Bill led Harry up the stairs. Harry was grateful for the hand on his lower back, guiding him, as he couldn\'t see very well and his legs were a bit shaky. \"You\'re lucky Harry; as a guest she gives you a break. Didn\'t you notice most the people out on the grass weren\'t family?\" [q/]

You have Charlie talking but then you have Bill leading Harry upstairs.

Also, just for fun...I couldn\'t get your story out of my head today at work...talk about trying to keep your mind focused...thefigufigured you probably had another chapter posted.

; ) I love it when I\'m Psychic.

Talk about a mean hex. Poor Harry. This is getting to be a great story. I can\'t wait to see moreokinoking forward to it. Keep it up.