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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s not often that a fic strikes my emotions, but this chappie made me bawl. I\'m sorry...it\'s just so UNFAIR!!!!! Poor Harry, Poor Ron, Poor SEVVIE!! Waahhhhh!!!! Don\'t leave us waiting for the next chapter, PLEASE?
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! It is very well writen and is constantly getting better with each chapter! You write the Harry/Severus relationshipo perfectly. The characters seem real inst3ead of having them fall in love over night, having no problems, and living happily ever after! I am also glad you have updated three days in a row! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!!! Love the story again ^_^
~Dawn
~Dawn
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!!! YOU STOPPED!
This has got to be one of the best cliff\'s I\'ve read! You have the tension of the room, the chaos of third parties not really important to the plot, and the hidden meanings down to a T. Like that lust potion, you\'d better relieve this suspence before I pop! ;P
This has got to be one of the best cliff\'s I\'ve read! You have the tension of the room, the chaos of third parties not really important to the plot, and the hidden meanings down to a T. Like that lust potion, you\'d better relieve this suspence before I pop! ;P
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good, the plot is very captivating, I can\'t wait to see what happens next. You\'ve kept me at computer screens for two days now when I\'m outside of class.
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wondeful chapter! Loved Severus\' actions to both save Harry *and* manage to not blow his cover as Spy. Perfect compromise.
And the scene in the classroom and flying were both fantastic.
And I am *so* glad you said weldn\ldn\'t have to wait long for the next part. : )~
Kiri
And the scene in the classroom and flying were both fantastic.
And I am *so* glad you said weldn\ldn\'t have to wait long for the next part. : )~
Kiri
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O !!!!!!!!*faints*X.x lol I love it!Plz write more!!!
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....
I\'m on the edge of my seat. Can\'t wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. This story is turning out to be so much deeper than I had originaly expected. Wonderful! I\'m looking forward to your next update.
I\'m on the edge of my seat. Can\'t wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. This story is turning out to be so much deeper than I had originaly expected. Wonderful! I\'m looking forward to your next update.
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter, I enjoyed \'seeing\' Harry & Hermione on their \'date\' night. I did spot a grammar error however, here is the text: \"Ron and me told Ginny we would help her train up before the quidditch tryouts.\" This really should be \'Ron & I told...\'.
Well, time to read the next chapter.
Well, time to read the next chapter.
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a nasty little cliffhanger. it makes me want the next part that much quicker. i hope ron will be okay. i\'m sure he will be, but i\'ll keep my fingers crossed regardless. this should be very very exciting, if this chapter was any indication. the storytelling is top notch and i love how you have harry interact with his friends. the scene with hermione at harry\'s for date night was great. her reaction to snape appearing was so funny. i was a little confused at how the little prank on kieran went down, mainly just where the first harry went to. i guess he apparated home or something. keep up the great work and i look forward to your next update.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay keep the story up please. I need to read it is important to me. Ya that was dorky well got to go. UPDATE SOON!!!