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for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

by LeeLeePotter

person Lady S
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been following your story for a while now and it just gets better and better. I can\'t wait to see updates keep up the good work.
person danny
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
something is wrong with chapter 46. It\'s not there.
person Magdelena
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
R U Sirius? He\'s really no relation? Now, now. Technically, in the Wizarding world, Sirius and Harry are related, so if Harry was Jo... Alright, I can\'t keep this up even on paper. I should never try to review at 1:30 in the morning after fighting with a two year old about his bedtime.

Now...we\'ve truly only one chapter to go to catch up. The twins were priceless in this chapter, I\'d forgotten to mention how much I love having them in here. Everyone generally runs to make them gay as well, but frankly I can picture them doing exactly that...using their wonder twin powers on the fe pop population. Meow!

Keep writing! Don\'t get all Live Journaled and ignore your writing! LOL!

Maggie
person Gina
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lee Lee Potter!! I have been looking for this story for quite sometime! All of a sudden it wasn\'t on fanfiction and I had to search like a mad man for it! Anywhoo, I am glad again to be reading this fantastic stoy, with updates no less...I was really afraid about how Harry would take the mock rape, and I am glad it has worked out...please keep up the good work!
person Kelly
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I can\'t thank you enough for this spectacular story! Your characters\' voices are very true to the original stories, and you have a brilliant blend of humor and angst. There are so many moments, after reading all 45 chapters together, that stand out: Seamus\' def of of Harry, both to the school, and again to his father; Snape\'s openness as a 17-year-old, and defensiveness after his change back; Harry\'s eraberability with Snape and his therapist; Ron and Hermione\'s different reactions to Harry\'s coming out. I think we\'ve seen much of Harry\'s fragility and Snape\'s strength. I hope we can see the tables turn, and Harry soothe Snape\'s insecurities, or perhaps save him when things look dark. Because I just discovered this story, I have no idea how long it takes you to post: however, any length of time would be worth it for the next chapter in this fabulous story!

(I\'m glad to see Magdalena\'s post: she is a talented auteur in her own right, and I have enjoyed her fanfic immensely as well.)
person cofaym
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*fidgets impatiently* I\'ve been reading this on Ink Stained Fingers for a whand and I\'ll admit I\'ve been checking nearly daily for chapter 47 to show up *whimpers* So cruel to leave a girl in suspense for a whole month.
person Kiristeen
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Simply incredible. I loved the thoughts of everyone in this rather incredibly tense situation. Snape\'s actions were ingenius. And Poor Ron, so freaked when it was happening -- not that I blame him. It\'s great that you had him realize *exactly* what Snape had done . . . saved him from . . . afterward. Very believable. I like how harry was so torn between friend and lover. It certain can\'t be an easy position to be in, and his thoughts while waiting at Snape\'s door were *so* real. You know, shifting from black and white thinking to the shades of grey. When do you draw the line? and when has that line been drawn too far?

Very thought provoking. Well done.

Kiri
person R.C.
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how can u do that?!?!? leavnig me on the edge of the mountain!!! update fast! ASAP!!!! ty
person Magdelena
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew! You\'ve been busily posting here! I\'m so glad you let Severus run through his angst internally. I know it may crop up later, but I don\'t know if I could stand another twenty chapters or so of Harry having to convince Sev that they were right for each other again. LOL! Who am I kidding? If you wrote it, I would read it and love every page of it! Can\'t wait for the next update. If I\'m correct, the aff.net posting is now caught up to what you\'ve published, right? So, now you can get busily typing, and I can have my DETAH fix again soon!

Maggie
person elementaldeity
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad that Harry and Sev have come out in the clear.

elementaldeity