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for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

by LeeLeePotter

person Hermione2928
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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BET YOU CAN\'T GUESS WHAT I THINK ABOUT YOUR STORY!
YOU GOT IT!
I LOVE IT!
person rubberduck
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whew, another chapter. finally. hehe. just joking. that was extremely long. no wonder it took so long. but it was good. i think i\'ve said it before, but the banter and interaction between the characters is top notch. it\'s so believable and fresh. of course, there is something that bothered me. ginny. it bothered snape too apparently. i understand she\'s a year younger than harry, ron and hermione but that still makes her seventeen, yet she was portrayed as very young or immature. i can understand her reaction to snapes appearance a little. she didn\'t want her father dragged away to work, but stiher her actions were very questionable. anyway, i really liked the chapter and i hope the next one doesn\'t takelonglong.
person Magdelena
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite a lot to handle in one chapter and yet, as usual, you handled it beautifully. I loved Charlie\'s reaction and insightfulness about Harry\'s lack of response to his kiss. And Ginny was priceless. Will she get a clue when she notices Sev\'s arm around Harry\'s waist? LOL.

Oh, and I was wondering when the \"F\" would come up again. That was brilliant!

person jj the jet plane
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DuDe, i so love it!!! Severus is alll \'hanging out with the weaslys\'
person Angie/Les`
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please. Ughh I got to go before I have any more trouble typing.
person uris
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lee Lee,
This has gone on long enough. Are you ever going to finish this?
person cofaym
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, sev covered in icing - I\'d like to see that! Another great chapter :)
person Luna_Kat04
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In the past three days I have monopolized all of the internet time I have been able to scrounge up to read this entire fic. I have every intention of printing the 47 posted chapters and adding it to my collection of favorites. I can\'t wait to find out about the date and the party at the Burrow. Your portrayal of the characters, especially Severus :), are superb. Keep up the good work and post as soon as you are able. ~Luna
person Magdelena
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even re-reading it, Molly\'s reaction is still my favorite. With so many sons I\'ll bet she does a lot of explaining! LOL!

Can\'t wait till Harry brings home Sev to meet the family!

Maggie
person emel_raines
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it! Poor oblivious Arthur.

You continue with an amazing chapture. The scene where he talked about what had happenned, it was liked any young person would tell it, how it starts off as a simple narrative and over its course changes back and forth between that and emotional. It\'s all very well written and I can\'t wait to read more.