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for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

by LeeLeePotter

person FallenAngel
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...it took me ages to get through all those chapters, but it was worth it! This is one fic I\'ll remember to check on for updates. It was amazing! A bit angsty for a while...I was in tears when Harry was trying to sort through his feelings on Sev \"raping\" Ron...but it was so great! Please update frequently and I\'ll continue to review after each update! Oh...and would you mind looking at my work? No one ever does, but I\'d like to have a good writer take a look at my fics. FallenAngel is my penname on the site. There\'s three of us, I\'m the third one if you use search and authors. Please check out my stuff if you have the chance! And review if you do, I LOVE feedback! Write more soon!
person Chelsea
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear god you are killing me softly. I LOVE your story. LOVE IT. Though for some reason it had absolutely no apeal to me when i saw it on Fanfiction.net and avoide, bu, but ugh now I totally regret that. Amazing. Fabulous. Sexy. Ahhhhh yes.
person crudedly
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i refrained a long time from reading your stoeveneven though i had heard so much of it... the length is just stunning! I was a bit afraid, i must admit, because i don\'t really like long stories where the couple gets together in the beginning and then stumbles from one stupid situation to the next. I am pleato sto say that your story is different! Despite the fact that Harry and Sev had something going on during the holiday, there were some serious things between them still.
That is the long way to say that your story is wonderful and i\'d love to read more of it! ;-)
person Luna_Kat04
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I\'m so proud! I got a thankyou listed on someone\'s story:) This is a first! And from such a great author....I\'m swooning. Great post yet again. The Charlevereverus interaction was sneaky ;p I can\'t wait to see everyone\'s reactions to Severus slipping his arm around Harry...What will Bill and Ginny do? They seem to be the only two who haven\'t figured out the new coupling yet...Waiting eagerly for your next post....
person CuriousGeorgette
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say how much I have enjoyed reading DETaH GREAT STORY! Love the premise.
person AristaStarfyr
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another wonderful chapter. It reminds me so much of my own family parties.

Another brilliant work you did was with Ginny. Being the eldest of three children, I know how it is to have the baby of the family kept as a baby for as long as possible. And with Ginny being the only girl and the youngest, I think that Molly and Aurther would not coax her to being an adult, nor act like one so that they could keep their little girl for as long as possible. It\'s not that she seemed spoiled, but her situation would deem that she may be emotionally and mentally yer ter than her actual age.


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person Mara
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I\'m going to stroke your ego a bit. I\'m really enjoythisthis story. You have an excellent balance of adventure, angst and humoursidesidering most fanfics that I have read stick with just one set and then either a fluffy or sad ending.

Regarding Chapter 48...I am looking forwards to Ginny\'s reaction to finding out her past crush is going out with her Potions Professor. I realize that this would possibly be just a side note, since the story centers around Harry & Sev.

As I wait pleasantly for the next installment, what other fics have you written that I could read?
person LustyMuse
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! *bounces* I love Sev playing on Harry\'s \"jelousy\"... Its not jelousy per se, just nerves, and their relationship is sweet without being saccharine...
person Brad
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... It has taken me all weekend, but I have caught up! I totally love this and hope that you will update again soon. Sev in leather... sounds like a dream come ture...
person chocs
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I found this story on fanfiction aas tas tatally depressed when I couldn\'t find it there. Finally I found it here Yay!!!! I am so happy! Thank you!