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for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

by LeeLeePotter

person Magdelena
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! ike ike totally love this. More, please...MORE!! *snort*
person LustyMuse
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review! Feed the author!

I would have punched Vernon back but I\'m weird that way
person AristaStarfyr
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry has grown up a lot! It takes much to face one\'s adversaries. Also, good for Sev, in showing great restraint in not throttling the \'family\'. Interestingly enough, Albus didn\'t seem to push this \'choice\' for the Dursleys as overtly as he would with mages. Does he have a different set of ethics for Muggles? Or was this more a test on Harry to see how he would handle the situation? He passed with flying colors in my book!

Ari
person jj the jet plane
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is it tha that i think something bad is going to happen at lunch?
cus i do
person Gina
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi ya! Lovely, story; it is always such a treat to know you update this story frequently! Ok, though, I love fluff etc.. but I\'m just wodering where your headed with this story and how many more chapters you\'ll have..though I LOVE this story and don\'t want it to end mind you... : ) Love that outfit and the broom scene..also like that description that Remus had of Harry...very nice to see it from a different perspective.. That Ginny part too was funny.. grabbing his ass!! LOL!! Keep up the fantastic work!!!
person Tigher
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I realy enjoy your fan fic. ARe you sure you are not related to the person that makes the oringal harry potter books? You have very good plots.
i hope you keep writing.
^_^
person Kentucky Fried Frogs
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, i\'m glad Remus is in the picture a bit moi lii like him. Reckon the chapter could have use a bit more smut, but other than that it was wicked, thank you for updating and i hope you do so again soon.
person Faline
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**jumps up and down punching at the air in joy** YAYAYAYAY!!!!! This is another amazing chapter. I love the interaction between Lupin and Harry. One of the things I sometimes forget about Remus is that he IS a warewolf and can smell everything. So, that was a neat twist. It was sad too . . . I hadn\'t considered what the psychological effect of losing your lover to a letter reaking of someone else\'s blood then getting back the body of your lover covered in the same scent could do. And not to mention that same scent in your class room. So, that was a bonzer good chapter. I really can\'t wait for the next one with out grinning like a fool. :)

Faline
person Blackrose
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I am looknig forward to lots more in the near furure. Keep it up.
person rubberduck
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whew, i feel like i\'ve been waiting forever to read another chapter, but i know how it is. and by god you write long chapters. like i\'ve mentioned before (and most likely will keep mentioning. just like a broken record. or a skipping cd. don\'t ask, i\'m having issues) i really enjoy how harry interacts with everyone. ginny\'s realization about harry and snape was very funny. i could just see the dawning horror? shock? cross her face. i think you should write more hermione. i like her. now while the talk between lupin and harry was good, i was a bit disappointed too. i thought there would be more tension between them. i like the hint that the wolf in lupin takes over on the full moon and is hard to control a bit after and before, so i was hoping to see some more animalistic tendencies from the man. especially since he has such a strong sniffer and harry\'s recent head wound. okay, this is starting to sound like a book review. hmmm, i guess that\'s what it is though. anyway, i hope the next chapter comes out just a tad sooner, but as long as it comes i\'ll be reading.