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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i had started reading this story when it was on fanfiction.net, and was saddened when it was taken down, so i\'m happy to see it here. this uch uch an amazing story, truely beautiful, and this is coming from a slytherin, so it\'s saying something. i\'ll be looking forward to reading more
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is brilliant can\'t wait for more!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant installment. I cant wait to see what happens when Sev finds out Vernon thumped Harry!!!!!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would log in, but I\'ve forgotten my password and it\'s not sending it to my email, so I think I\'ve forgotten my exact login too. But anyway. It\'s just as good as ever. Keep it up.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummm sorry to be a bother but I\'ve had to change my email addy and thought i ought to tell you... by the way great chappie this time... even though I\'ve already reviewed it already.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!! DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!! I was so looking forward to some nice smut chapter, full of detail, thatld hld have been such a treat to read...especially with that chapter title \"Pleasures of the Flesh\"...boy was i wrong. Not that the chapter was bad or boring by any means, but when I assumed it would be smut filled, this chapter just didn\'t compare...and why did you decide to name this chappie Pleasures of the Flesh??...it didn\'t seem to fit with the chapter.. Thanks for the update though! : P
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is awesome. I am glad that Sev was... comforting (of sorts) Harry after the incedent. Hehehe. Ok well update soon.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I\'ve just started reading your story a few days ago. It\'s a fun, well-balanced read. I feel like i\'m reading two or three stories in a series. Thanks for sharing!
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Funky... evil Dursleys evil... sweet sevvy though... Can\'t wait for more
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story line is good, the characters are developed and it makes for an enjoyable read.
However, you need to work on subjective and objective case pronounds and subject/verb agreement as well as verb tenses. You need a beta who is skilled in English grammar.
That being said, I would like to know when you update the story as I wto fto finish it.
Dante
However, you need to work on subjective and objective case pronounds and subject/verb agreement as well as verb tenses. You need a beta who is skilled in English grammar.
That being said, I would like to know when you update the story as I wto fto finish it.
Dante