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for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

by LeeLeePotter

person Luna Riddle
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, another chapter, and it\'s great to see the dursleys getting attacked, it\'s about time they got what they deserved! i\'ll be ing ing forward to seeing more
person Linis
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yey I\'ve been waiting for this for ages... okay maybe not that long but long enough... Hope the next chapter is up soon I wanna know how Harry reacts to the attack and whether Severus is okay.

LINIS
person Darshu
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What can I say that probably hasn\'t already been said about how wonderful this story is? Probably nothing, so I\'ll just say it all ay. ay. I\'ve really enjoyed the first 51 chapters!! They\'re absolutely wonderful! Hmm...some other adjectives. Okay, how about: Great, Stupend and and totally wicked cool? In case you haven\'t noticed the trend, I LOVE IT!! And I love how you\'re written the relationship between Harry and Snape. Very realistic. The way they have to deal with Snape\'s Death Eater activities, Harry\'s childhood, and how they affects their relationship elevates your story above the other \'serious\' stories that just brush over those factors. Your story has grit with a large dose of humor, just the way I like \'em!

Keep up the wonderful work, and I can\'t WAIT until the next chapter. I\'ll be waiting!
person Dolly
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I started your story last week end and could not wait each day to get home rea read. You are a wonderful writer please update soon.
person Emely Raines
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cue dramatic music here. Shit, Dursley\'s in for it. Keep up the good work, I can\'t wait to read more.
person Arwen Rayne
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know that I am about as senile as Dumbldore\'s grandmother and when lucid as still as confused as Dudley in a bridal wear shop but- HOW THE HELL DID I MISS THE FACT THAT THERE IS A NEW DARK LORD? WHO IS HE? DOES HE LOOK ANY BETTER THAN VOLDIE DID? IS HE TAKING APPLICATIONS FOR A \'DARK LADY\'? CHAPTER 51 RY HAY HAS ME STRESSING. I want to see Vernon live a long excrutiatingly painful life with wizards dropping by all the time to ask how he is doing.... And can we have Dudley come home from whereever hovering three feet off the ground/with a GOOD YEAR BLIMP sign pasted to his massive parts?
person Luna Riddle
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
go severus go!!! kick those bloody dursleys arses!!!!
person juliatheyounger
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am only up to chapter 36, but just wanted to let you know how much I\'m enjoying this story (and glad to see that I have many more chapters to read) particularly this part with the clever twist about the spell to heal Snape, it all makes sense now - and I\'m loving the angsty point you\'ve left this chapter one (am obviously going to read 37 asap!).
person jj the jet plane
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why am i afraid our dear Sev is going to do something completely stupid?
is he?
person abraxis
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a little behind on my reading. Doing Chapters 50 and 51 here.

I love it every time you get Harry and Hermione together, such interesting conversations.The image of Harry in an oatmeal bath with raisins was just too good. Loved the sweet scenes between Harry and Severus. Hated the visit to the Dursleys but know that it was necessary. Can\'t wait to see what Severus will arrange for Vernon. I just hopw it\'s something that the crud will have to live with for the rest of his ugle life rather than being allowed the mercy of death.

And ... I love your title even if it is a long one.