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Gee, you really got a good story here, but um...I\'m confused. I thought this was a Harry/Severus story and now it seems like Harry loves Ron...what\'s up with that? I mean if the Daily Prophet reported it...it\'s probably true...right? And they were hugging, and the whole family is over at Harry\'s house? Poor Severus...you\'ve just been stringing the poor guy along! Feel free to send him over to my house. I\'ll make him feel better!
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*smirk* How\'s that for a review??? I couldn\'t resist after the one you left me last time!! But seriously, there was no sex in this chapter, when do Harry and Severus get to have sex again? *runs and hides*

Maggie

what a chapter. even in such a brutal and violent chapter, i found lots of humour. of course that might just be because i\'m a sick bastard. hehe. seriously though, the whole misunderstanding over vernon and ron was quite amusing to me. and ron ron was smart enough to figure it out. that\'s rich. i really liked that. however, you gave it away by explaining the mix up while it was happening. i think it would have been better, a little more thrilling (not the right word, but i\'m having a mental breakdown at the moment) if you had just let the action flow and let the reader in on the secret when ron figured it out. well, i can\'t wait for the next chapter. hopefully it won\'t be as long a wait. hint hint.

Great story!
I really love it!
Update soon!

I dunno, but chapters of late seem be lacking in your usual flare. Also, in this chapter alone, I found wholwhole incident with the breaking the glass-reminder of the Dursleys, and not noticing the potion Ron slipped him, and being unawares of Ron in the next room when he woke up, very unfitting. I just don\'t see how any of those incidents are possible, he\'s having all this traning with Severus and Kingsley (which you have\'t brought up in a while) but yet he\'s soed aed and fooled in these simple situations....ok, i do understand he is in his own home, he may not check his food...but common, wasn\'t that training supposed to be totally ingrained into his head that it would be second nature...yet, it seems like all that training had totally dissapated. Sorry, sorry. I\'m not flaming, and mean no harm, but I just found that little bit a bit incongruent with the story.

Thanks, hoping for an update always. A faithful reader who always wants more SMUT!

yay!!! i love this story so much!!

ohhh...what will they d Ver Vernon?? and why did Sev tell Ron about the attack..did he want them to be saved??
can\'t wait for the next chapter, i hope Harry\'s alright when he finds out..
aaww...i love him n Sev together, they\'re so cute!! :)

keep up the excellent writing!
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I loved the way Ron is finally beginning to understand Harry\'s relationship with Severus and maybe even beginning to see the good in Severus that Harry does.

What an excellent plan of Severus\' to keep Petunia and Dudley from the worst of it. Please, please let us in on all the gory details of what happens to that bastard Vernon. Also, please tell us who the Death Eater who died was. The snake was a very, very nice touch.

I\'m glad to see Severus and Ron getting along more. I just hope that it wasn\'t Severus who was bitten by the snake. Surely the snake would realize that Severus was a friend after hg gog gone with Harry to the Dursley\'s the week prior, even if he was invisible. Another lovely chapter.

Oooo, fighting ensues. This was yet another excellent chapter, delving deep into the pysche of...well, it was good, and my brain just went blah.

It\'s great how you write the relationship \'tween Hermy and Ron. He\'s SO clueless, sometimes! And there\'s the bits where Harry proves that old habits are hard to break. And Sev is NOT a nice guy. He\'s using his influence in the Death Eater deal to get back at the Dursleys Nee Need I say more? It\'s great!

How could end end it there? That had better not be Severus that was bitten! You\'d better update soon!

That was bloody excellent!!! I\'m so glad you got that posted tonight, my son is gone to Gramma\'s and it\'s so much nicer to read it as a whole vs. between bouts of \"Mom I need..\"

Anyway, onto my comments. I love that Ron planned to go to Privet Drive to scare the fuck out of the Dursleys. What stupid luck, and great writing *smirk*, that he got there the same night as Sev and friends. And I can\'t wait to find out who died.

Kudos to Albus for waiting to call Minerva. Again speaks well to your take on Albus that he unquestionably protects Sev and Harry at the same time. Great chapter, Lee!!

Maggie