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a very emotional chapter. you handle the friendships and the interactions beautifully. i really love hermione and harry\'s friendship and how they talk and carry on. it\'s very refreshing. i do have a complaint though. when harry was telling severus about the picture, yourn ofn of phrase. from reading your previous chapters and \'witnessing\' the events, the reader knows what actually happened, but from how harry told severus, it\'s not clear. \"Did Albus tell you it was Ron\'s friend that led me to believe he was dead?\" this line here is very confusing. who is believed to be dead? severus didn\'t know harry thought ron was dead at the time. the rest of the exchange goes on in the same vein not really taking into account that the professor shouldn\'t know the details of the embrace between ron and harry. sheesh, that went on longer than i intended. hehe. other than that very small, but important part of the story, i for the most part really enjoyed the chapter. can\'t wait for more. hopefully the site will stay up for another posting.

Holy feckin\' cra mad made it through! I\'ve been reading this for the last three days. I was late for work because I just had to finish \"one more chapter\". What can I say? WOW!!! This is just awesome! I thought it was really cute and fun in the begining but I love the way things have twisted and turned since then. And it\'s nice to see someone else with the same vision of Snape that I have. Can\'t wait for the next chapter! Whoo-hoo!

To be honest the last chapter or 2 I\'ve thought to be a bit off from your usual style, and content. But this chapter I\'m so relieved to see that you\'ve really gotten back into your flow. This chappie really characterizes what I\'ve loved about this story especially...the long chapters, a hot scene(or reming ing of one), some conflict, some humor, and a direct path to the next chapter, and continuous flow in the story. This chapter really chaptured all of that and I am glad! Keep up the good work! An avid reader waiting for an update! : )

Great chapter. Please update soon!

Excellent chapter! I wonder if Dudley will learn anything there that he shouldn\'t know. Like about Sev, for example. Theoretically, if Voldie got Dudley and Dudley said something about \'that Death Eater\' who was in the apartment before Harry \'banished\' him, there could be hell to pay.

And what\'s Lucius on about? It\'s something Lucius doesn\'t want anyone to know about, even (or especially) Voldemort... And Lucius could do the same thing for Severus... What is it? It couldn\'t be potions, at least.

I can\'t wait to see the next part. ^_^

Hi Lee Lee!!! It\'s been a while since I\'ve been able to read this story but I LOVE IT STILL!!! Great chapter. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next. You are my FAV ff writer!!!!!!

o my goodness! this is the best story i\'ve ever read off of any of the fanfiction sites i\'ve been on! i LOVE it!! i love how you can make the real hp stories and this one fit together logically. and the way you have hooked harry and sev up is so origional...i really really really like your storry...keep writing!! :D

More, I nMoreMore give me more!

I love your story. Please do update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next!

hee hee I can imagine what would happen if Ron finds out abot that headline under the photo.

Wow....good stuff. It took me awhile to read it all but I\'m absolutely LOVING this story. The most recent chapter was hilarious! Poor Ron, he\'s not going to do very well with that picture...but I suppose he\'ll survive. I can\'t go back to the very beginning and compliment you on ever little thing that I\'ve enjoyed over the course of this story, but just know that you are a fantastic author and I hope that you continue to update with the same amazing stuff that you\'ve already written. Keep up the totally excellent work! :D *snuggles Snape/harry*

~Anatra