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for Killing Cupid

by Seva

person XxphoenixX
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::whimper::
::squeal::
::sigh::
::muffled laughter::
::throaty moan::
::various other noises, many indescribable and possibly inhuman::
I laughed; I cried; I wanted to steal Hermione\'s very existance in order to frolic - ha! frolic! - with Severus.
I don\'t know what\'s gotten into me, woman. I\'m not usually this much of a Snape fan but your writing makes me want to shacklm tom to something or other... actually, I\'d rather him do that shackling. Are you sure this is your first fic? I honestly don\'t mind the detour from the Valentine\'s plot... ;)
I can\'t believe Harry and Ron gave her a blow job tutorial. That is just hilarious. And what did you mean by just in case? Oh gods, do I want to know. Yes! I do! I do! Can your explanation involve diagrams and other photographic aids? Please?
person Heather
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Christ on a bike!! LOL! Funny stuff! I can\'t wait to read more.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5...... Glad to see that our dear professor got a bit of relief;-) I am looking forward to more, including the mutual pleasure they will feel when they finally share each other!!! Can\'tt fot for more!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
person Snapeaholic
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooohhhhhhh, I wish I was Hermione!!!!! Love it, love it, love it!
person Titania
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn it all! When is the next to be posted???
Let me just say that I like your writing style, it\'s very well done and I don\'t see any huge errors with the spelling etc.

Very erotic my dear. I am looking forward to the rest.

Titania
Author of Fucking with Snape and Walls
person Jo
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello darling! Well...! What can one say about such a spectacular chapter? Am neither disgusted nor appauled, you\'ll be glad to hear. Rather enjoyed it actually *sniggers*... Ahem... And no, the thought of you dancing around insanely to the likes of Iggy Pop did not make me fall off my chair, greatly amused, *muffles uncontrollable laughter*. Till next time, dearest. Ciao! xxx
person nesscafe
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF PEARL!!! Lucky wench! I wanna be Hermione! What a chapter! What a man! Great writing! I\'m sweating and need a cold shower now thank you very much! *looks around suspiously and whispers* More please! :cD
person XxphoenixX
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::squeal:: ahhh! That was positively frabjous! I can\'t believe it. I\'m going even more insane than I was before... if that\'s possible. Sev is so sexy. Especially when he\'s domineering. ::sigh:: I really gotta get back to my work but I can\'t think straight... and it\'s all you\'re bloody fault! Not that I mind, darling. ;)
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is your first fic??? It is awesome!
Great lemons by the way. Nummy!

I LOVE the Ramones! (Great, now I have Ramones tunes in my head.)

Write more soon please.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4...... VERY NICE bit of relief for Hermione, lucky lady!!! I am sure that you will be allowing Severus some relief as well!!! I just love how men think they are in control;-) Can\'t wait to see Severus get his release & relief at the ha(or (or whatever) of Hermione & then maybe some joint comfort!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<