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for Killing Cupid

by Seva

person Kat Delacour
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more!! More!!! MORE!!!!

Unfortunately I don\'t seem able to grasp the English language well enough to give you a fitting review ... but sod it, that\'s the intention of such a delightful tale!! Well done, I look forward to reading .
Ka.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... This is BEAUTIFUL!!! I am a hopeful (not hopeless!!!) romantic & this chapter just touched my heart!!! To know that someone shares the pure love that your heart holds is the most wonderful gift one could receive!!!

I am very much looking forward to seeing what plan Severus has brewing in that fabulously devious mind of his!!! Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
person XxphoenixX
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the lack of smut in this chapter, although in a way disappointing (you did warn us, didn\'t you?), has returned me to a more coherent state. I like the detatched tone of this chapter... although the slightly romantic feel and the crying Hermione weren\'t quite as amusing as the rest of your tale. I\'m not too familiar with the challenge guidelines myself, and although I do love your story, I am beginning to wonder how exactly you plan on following whatever the challenge was, as there has been very little to do with Valentine\'s Day or \"Killing Cupid\" so far. Not to say that I don\'t live this story. I do! I do, I tell you. It\'s fantasmic. Fantastic. Orgasmic. See? Orgastic sounded weird, so I prefer fantasmic. It\'s a new word I invented that seems to describe this fic (I won\'t lie, it can describe many others as well, but this fic in particular). So, continue updating your fantasmic story... but be careful with the plot. And don\'t get too mushy on me, darling.
person spaz141
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a work of lemon art...that\'s all I can say. Thanks.
person Fish
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I now have this hilarious image of Hermione suddenly whipping out a ruler and measuring Severus\' *ahem* \'manhood\'
ROTFL!
Great fic, am loving it!
Only sorry I never reviewed before now!
MORE SOON!

Ciao,
Fish
person Lizski
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your sense of humor, and your writing style - it\'s really refreshing. And did I mention that I love this story? This is wonderful! I look forward to updates on this! (Ah, smut. Good, wonderful smut!)
person Jo
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... i might just do a bad review now so you\'ll have to send that vampire over (wooo!)... so here it is... *ahem* That was... err... rude and... bad... NO! I CAN\"T DO IT! To insult the random spectator\'s work is simply wrong! ANOTHER fab chapter, sweetie, as per usual :) Glad to see that the Professor got what he deserved. Now, where\'s that S+M u were talking bout...? Looking forward to the next installment, as always. Till next time xxxx
person Snapeaholic
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord, woman! Don\'t leave us in suspense! UPDATE SOON!!!!
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That just hit the spot. A little oral sex for Severus always brightens my day.

Cheers!
person Hawklaw
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And another great chapter! If you write oral sex that well, I\'m really looking forward to the main event!