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for Killing Cupid

by Seva

person Jo
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, darling. You knew just what i wanted. Oh to have severus in a rickman-in-a-sense-and-sensibility stylee outfit... *sigh*. That hit the spot *giggles childishly* well, tis but 5 hrs till i bugger off to the land near the land with the wonderful telephone system, all the furry animals... including the majectic moose (A moose once bit my sister!). Tis all go here. have packed but am at the moment stressed that have no nose-warmer. But before i go, i just had 2 RnR bout this spectacular chapter. Thank god they finally fucked, but the build up made it more exciting! Oh, and thanks for that bit of SnM. Needed that! *grins widly* till nxt wesweesweetie! *mwah*
TTFN
xxxxx
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9... They say that there is a fine line between pleasure & pain & I think you proved that point in the MOST DELICIOUS way!!! I would have to say tha Hermione was given more than a little release & relief here!!! I do hope that they wake up before anyone shows up for potions;-) do do hope that your workload will slow up for you soon!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
person XxphoenixX
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow. Holy shite. I\'m going to need a moment to recover.

Do you think I could borrow him? Just for a little while. I promise I\'ll give him back. (*looks around suspiciously as crosses fingers behind back*)

Fantastic. Smut, anxiety, smut, chains, smut, humor, smut. And did I mention the fabulous smut? Screw the plot, this is better. Speaking of screwing...

One thing though, m\'dear: I love Severus POV... do you think you could have a bit more of that? In addition to all of the beloved aforementioned things - smut being the most important.

Another mind-blowing ( wink wink ) chapter... Update!
person intofire101
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok very good chapter. I don\'t really have anything to say because I\'m really tiered because I didn\'t sleep last night however if I had gotten sleep I\'m sure I would have some sort of dazeling coment that would awe and inspire you but I didn\'t so I will have to save m awe and insiring comments for another day. write again soon I love your fic.
intofire101 ;)
person Alison of the Faeries
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...such...good...smut....
person Lizski
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Smut! Wonderful smut! More, please!
person nesscafe
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yum Yum! This is one hot little Valentine fic! I could careless if this ever gets to a plot! Just keep up the smut! You have a gift! I\'m still working on the smut for Confessions of a Levelheaded Witch! It\'s so not easy for me! I salute you oh great writer of smut! Write on!!!
person WizardingAngel
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow very detailed and good.............. This a agreat story adn t just fy what I just said i am speachles at this and I have no words to describe how good this is........... So keep doing a great work on this and If anything take your time on this.........\" All great things come to those who wait.\"
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Soooo hot.. Are you sure I can\'t trade places with Hermione? Please????
person Talene
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! More....gotta have MORE! hehe You write some hot stuff girl! More?? Pleeeeeeze?