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Ah, i return! I kept my nose through 8 days of -36 degrees. bloody miracle! enjoyed the last chapter tremendously, as always! Am in joyous mood as have jst returned from shopping with a great pair of boots! Woo! gotta go so will c u soon! get that nxt chappie up b4 i explode from antici...................pation! Xxxxxxxxx

thas aas a wonderfull two chaps ( that I caught up with ) the scees aws awsome and almost so near to real life............... Got Neville right on the head of his reaction to Snape It was funny in a way. like allways keep up the excelent work.

Ah, satisfaction! YUM!!! Nothing like a mindless shag on the floor to make up for the interuption in the last chapter. Forgiven! I like this story! Can\'t help it, good smut is hard to find and you have a gift! I wouldn\'t take the lack of reviews to hits personal. Some folks just don\'t bother to review. They like to read the good stuff, but don\'t want to call attention to themselves. Your work is excellant! I wouldn\'t say it if I didn\'t think so. I don\'t read what I don\'t like. I avoid it like the plague! ;c) I love this story though. I don\'t really care how much plot if any you put in it as the smut is working just fine. Go w/ your muse wherever she takes you. If this is meant to have a plot it will flow into it, if it isn\'t then don\'t be disappointed. SometimWP\'WP\'s come from good ideas that just don\'t work into the story and sometimes long stories come from one shot smut fics. You just gotta go w/ the flow.

Hugs,
Ness

I am so glad to hear that you are feeling better!!!

Chapter 11... You did one hell of a good job here!!! This chapter really made Severus & Hermione e hue human in their relationship!!! Many people find that there best sex is after a fight or arguement becauseis sis so very extreme & allows them to forgive without having to find too many words to do it!!!

I can\'t wait to see what happens during that next class as well as where you take them after!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

Well, all things considering, that could have been worse for Severus and Hermione. Neville could have actually walked in on them. Other than that, it was a promising morning turned tot.
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You ex is a total wanker! Did you have the flu? Is that why you were throwing up for a week? And then he broke up with you?!?! What a jack-ass! Remember, chocolate and girlfriends always cure a trampled upon heart. You are also welcome to bitch to me. Your friendly neighborhood smut kitten. (grins)

First off, I do hope that you are now feeling much better an if not that you will soon!!! Secondly, the mom in me feels that you are better off without a man with such poor thought & timing!!! I will be hoping that you will be found by a man that will appreciate you & be much better for you!!!

Chapter 10... What a way to wake!! !! Too bad that it ended up being more of a teasing situation & that they were interupted!!! Poor Severus & Hermione!!!

Poor Neville as well!!! What was Minerva thinking in sending him down there?!?

I am curious if Hermione\'s being missing was noticed & wondering as well if Neville will realize who the nighgown belongs to? Will someone start putting 2 and 2 together? Can\'t wait to find out!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<

Piss on the challenge rules! Just write what comes to you! I love it! I was hoping for a good morning romp almost as much as poor Severus! Aw well, he\'ll just have to wait. I think you did a wonderful job w/ this last chapter! I found Snapes string of obsineties hillarious! I could so picture Hermione trying to be all sexy and awaken him nice and he does that! LOL! Love it! I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Write on honey! Write on!

\"A plan, but not just any plan, a plan so cunning you could stick a tail on it and call it a weasel...\" I will have you know I laughed so hard I spilled my beer!! :) So far this is a very funny story and I\'m glad I found it. ;)

Thing1

Um, are you going to have them wake up be cla classes? It would be a real hoot if the students came in to find the two of them on the desk. HA!
The smut was very tasty by the way. What a sweet, dominating Severus you have there.
More! (Says your loyal smut kitten. That is a REALLY good description of us by the way.)

This is really hot!!! I am so proud of you! I don\'t really care if you fudge the challenge. I like to issue challenges just to get people to write! LOL! I\'m not a stickler for the rules. It\'s cool when people do try to work the rules in, but I so thisyouryour story, honey, go where your muse takes you!

Hugs,
Ness