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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... It\'s nice to see something about first true loves that don\'t revolve entirely around sex. I\'m not sure how much more you have planned for this story, but you have done a great job with it... I love the fact that someone has given Draco Malfoy a softer side that doesn\'t have him being gay (no offense intended for the statement).
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I just fiinished reading The dragons Child Bride. I have to tell you. It was one of the best stories that I have seen in a long time. I enjoyed it so much that I stayed up all night to read it. You have got a lot of talent and you need to write more. email me mercurypagen@yahoo.com if you have any other stories that you are working on. Good job Thena
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yipee ;) a new chapter!! I just worry about Draco not getting jealous - I would love if my boyfriend would act the same !! *smile* keep going!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely well enough. This isn\'t my usual ship especially with an OC, but you are doing an amazing job. Please continue.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Anyway, that was a good chapter. Will Harry ever get over himself and notice Ginny? Will he ever get over Lani? That was sweet love scene.
elementaldeity
elementaldeity
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter ;) don\'t stop writing! you\'re great !!!
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HIYAS! i really enjoy reading your story. this was one of my first hp fics in a REALLY long time and u gave me a really great new image of draco. also, i really love laylani, u did a really good job with character design on her.....hmmm.....well....i guese thats all for now.....update really soon! i wanna see harry get the shit beat out of him! LOL!(....so sue me....the whole hero thing annoys me ;P)
Byy byyy!!!!!!!!
androgyny>;p
Byy byyy!!!!!!!!
androgyny>;p
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing a Draco/OFC. There really aren\'t that many out there. I can\'t wait to see Draco\'s reaction to the news that Lani was taken by Death Eaters. And I can\'t wait to see if this will cause Lucius to switch loyalties. I hope so. I truly hate Voldemort - more than is normal for a person to hate a fictional character.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s ok, seems a little Mary-Sueish the whole everyone love her and she loved everyone...classic syndrome of a Mary-Sue, but sometimes a girl needs a good old mary-sue fest...so I\'m not really complaining all that much, if I were I could go read another story....
hehe, I think I just saved you all the insults you could use against the \"Mary-Sue\" screamer that I am...lol...^_^
hehe, I think I just saved you all the insults you could use against the \"Mary-Sue\" screamer that I am...lol...^_^
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!I totally love your story !It\'s great!Please continue writing;)I need to know what will happen to Laylani!I just can\'t figure out what Snape\'s doing...