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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, chapter 5 was just too sweet for words. To think that the Malfoy family could lose composure so, could, deep down, have such emotion and strong feelings inside them. I love how Draco is so protective over her, so sweet. I think it\'s funny and cute that she woke up and just said, \"Hi\" and then fell back asleep. Somehow it seems much more suitable, happy, and fitting for the mood for her to have done that rather than panicking or something. I\'m so glad Draco has someone to love. This is such a cool fic! I love it! I will continue reading and reviewing, and when there aren\'t any chapters left to review (I think there is one left right now), then I will beg for updates.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, AUGH! Chapter six, the ending! HOW could you leave me in such a state?! What will Draco\'s reaction be? Does that mean she remembers who he is, or just that he\'s the nice little boy? Oh, I am DYING for the next chapter! I love this fanfic, it is so original, and well-written, and different than other fics I\'ve read. I loved it from the start, there are so many original ideas and seeing how the Malfoys really are. I really love Draco in this fanfic, he is sweet, yet still fabulously in character. I feel pity for Laylani, and yet I am happy because she seems to make Draco happy and seems like a nice enough, albeit confused and traumatized, person. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Please write more! Please email me when you update this fic!
Good luck with continuing it, I am an ever devoted fan and will re-read and review again, and check up on this, to see if it has been updated (unless you, the author, email me when this fic is updated).
Thanks for writing such an intriguing fic. I look forward wholly to the next chapter.
Good luck with continuing it, I am an ever devoted fan and will re-read and review again, and check up on this, to see if it has been updated (unless you, the author, email me when this fic is updated).
Thanks for writing such an intriguing fic. I look forward wholly to the next chapter.
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and I like the plot and t is very well writen..............Draco\'s father personality on the nail. and Please up date soon want to see what happens
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another greaat chapter this is going to be good....................as always keep up the great work
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I honestly love this! I love the way you have written Draco\'s parents. They seem so vulnerable and confused... something you rarely see in fics now a days. I have to find out Draco\'s reaction!! It will be classic! Will she have amnesia? She has to remember Draco!!!
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So you keep torturing...how clever now I am completely hoo So So please be kind and update.
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay.. I freaking love this... please continue soon!
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is such a nice story!! Please keep writing! It\'s a cool story and I can\'t wait until draco meets her!
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And that unconcious body is leilani? Please update soon.
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have my total and undivided interest. Please continue. I am dying to know who they tripped over.