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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read your fanfic and i have one thing to sayWOW.WOW...lol...it was truly impressive. I liked the creativity and realism you put into it all. I\'m dying to know what happens after chapter 9....please update soon!
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no! I wished she would tell Draco so he wouldn\'t be such a dumbass to understand lol. I\'m so looney!! update real soon
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah really romatic...tee hee hee. I love this story you know.
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 was so sweet! Almost too sweet, really, because I\'m not a fluff person, but I still liked this chapter. I like that yodn\'dn\'t make the beginning of the wonderful thing at the start, that you made Draco make a mistake, made Laylani unsure of herself. That is a realistic approach and made it all the more interesting. I liked the floating candles, and the picnic and ride on the broom and all that was sweet, but not so much as to be really cliche, and plus it had those lovely magic additioins that added to its uniqueness. I like that Mari seems to be getting progress with Laylani, but that it isn\'t asy jsy job and Laylani still doesn\'t want to reveal some stuff. I am very curious about Laylani, about what Dumbledore will think upon meeting her and the testing, and how the testing will go!
Once again, I must say it would be lovely to be emailed when this great fic is updated. Thanks for updating soon and emailing me before, I look forward to the next chapter.
Once again, I must say it would be lovely to be emailed when this great fic is updated. Thanks for updating soon and emailing me before, I look forward to the next chapter.
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bravo so far. I really really want you to update this story :} soon
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely best chapter(7) this far...Oh I hope that Narcissa and/or Lucius sees them sleeping together.
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED chapter seven, LOVED it!
Thank you for emailing me about the update. I appreciate it very much.
This chapter, seven, was so emotional! We got hints of Laylani\'s past. To think of the power she has, wandless magic! That is so amazing, and such a unique idea. You would think that others would have thought of it, but I haven\'t read other fanfics where wandless magic is used. That doctor, the one that made Laylani angry, I don\'t like him. He doesn\'t seem to know what he is doing. On the other hand, this Mari lady is very nice. She reminds me kinda of Sprout, being short and having that jolliness about her. I like her a lot. It\'s funny how she said she didn\'t mean to clean up, but was sorry anyway. Reminds me kinda of myself sometimes.
I think it\'s really good that Laylani got a woman therapist. I am kinda dreading when Draco goes back to school because I know he will be sad, and Laylani needs her knight in shining armor! I am angry that Lucius is considered USING Laylani for the Dark Side! That is horrible. That brings up the thought, what would Laylani think of the Dark Side? She would probably be against it. That also brings up, what does Draco think? That issue has not been hit upon in this fic. Yet. I am curious about that.
Draco\'s comment about \"I\'m used to women falling all over me,\" that was funny, and so very Draco. Kudos to ya for making him say that.
Draco is so sweet. The think about Laylani hiding in closets was interesting. It made me sad, because you can tell she has gone through a lot. It was a little confusing though. And there was a bit where you said \'head\' and meant hand, because Laylani only has one head, but you put \'other head\' or some such. I would beta for you, but I am in the middle of writing a buncha fics myself and would probably end up enjoying read the chapters so much I would forget to beta! Lol.
I like how Laylani rushed to Draco\'s bedroom, and how he just accepted it like that. It is really amazing and sweet how they know each other so well, even though Laylani doesn\'t remember so much and is traumatized. Heehee, shirtless Draco! Lucky Laylani.
Good chapter. Very dramatic and it made me very curious about stuff. I am very eager for more, could you please email me when you update again? That would be awesome. Good luck with writing more!
Thank you for emailing me about the update. I appreciate it very much.
This chapter, seven, was so emotional! We got hints of Laylani\'s past. To think of the power she has, wandless magic! That is so amazing, and such a unique idea. You would think that others would have thought of it, but I haven\'t read other fanfics where wandless magic is used. That doctor, the one that made Laylani angry, I don\'t like him. He doesn\'t seem to know what he is doing. On the other hand, this Mari lady is very nice. She reminds me kinda of Sprout, being short and having that jolliness about her. I like her a lot. It\'s funny how she said she didn\'t mean to clean up, but was sorry anyway. Reminds me kinda of myself sometimes.
I think it\'s really good that Laylani got a woman therapist. I am kinda dreading when Draco goes back to school because I know he will be sad, and Laylani needs her knight in shining armor! I am angry that Lucius is considered USING Laylani for the Dark Side! That is horrible. That brings up the thought, what would Laylani think of the Dark Side? She would probably be against it. That also brings up, what does Draco think? That issue has not been hit upon in this fic. Yet. I am curious about that.
Draco\'s comment about \"I\'m used to women falling all over me,\" that was funny, and so very Draco. Kudos to ya for making him say that.
Draco is so sweet. The think about Laylani hiding in closets was interesting. It made me sad, because you can tell she has gone through a lot. It was a little confusing though. And there was a bit where you said \'head\' and meant hand, because Laylani only has one head, but you put \'other head\' or some such. I would beta for you, but I am in the middle of writing a buncha fics myself and would probably end up enjoying read the chapters so much I would forget to beta! Lol.
I like how Laylani rushed to Draco\'s bedroom, and how he just accepted it like that. It is really amazing and sweet how they know each other so well, even though Laylani doesn\'t remember so much and is traumatized. Heehee, shirtless Draco! Lucky Laylani.
Good chapter. Very dramatic and it made me very curious about stuff. I am very eager for more, could you please email me when you update again? That would be awesome. Good luck with writing more!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great and you write well.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so intriguing. I love it! This is so creative, so unique, and well-written as well. Lucius and Narcissa have very strong personalities that are interesting to read about. I couldn\'t help but giggle at Lucius\'s \"poleece.\" I hope the girl is not in a coma though. That would be aggravating. I can\'t wait till Draco enters the
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This is very good, I will definitely keep on reading.
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This is very good, I will definitely keep on reading.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter four, it was so...I don\'t know what the word is. It was very well-written, and I like that Draco finally came into the fic. His emotions were expressed very well. I like the way you described how he is with his Quidditch team, it was interesting, in character, and just so veraco.aco. I could imagine his yelling \"goddamnit!\" in frustration so well.
Pansy is such an annoying bitch. At least she can be avoided if Draco leaves. Too bad he is missing that match. Very suitable title for the chapter, because some things ARE more important than Quidditch.
I can\'t wait to see Draco\'s reaction to Laylani being back. I hope she wakes up soon, too. Excellent writing, this fic is superb!
Pansy is such an annoying bitch. At least she can be avoided if Draco leaves. Too bad he is missing that match. Very suitable title for the chapter, because some things ARE more important than Quidditch.
I can\'t wait to see Draco\'s reaction to Laylani being back. I hope she wakes up soon, too. Excellent writing, this fic is superb!