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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done story. I\'d like to see a continuation of it having some weird effect on the battlefield or something.
BTW, the statement that Bourgin & Burkes can\'t carry cursed items is wrong. On page 52 of CoS, it is stated that an opal necklace that says \"Caution: Do Not Touch. Cursed. Has claimed the lives of 19 Muggles to date.\"
BTW, the statement that Bourgin & Burkes can\'t carry cursed items is wrong. On page 52 of CoS, it is stated that an opal necklace that says \"Caution: Do Not Touch. Cursed. Has claimed the lives of 19 Muggles to date.\"
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April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was adorable. I appreciate that you incorporate plot into your fluff without detracting from the warm-fuzziness. oh goodness. I just realized that I got warm fuzzies from a Snape fic. and it didn\'t seem out of chracter. nicely done!
I think that your writing styits its very well into these little one-shot excerpts. It tied in beautifully with the rest of your series, but stands alone quite nicely. I\'m also impressed with the way you write dialogue. these are great, I hope you continue to write a lot more in this vein- I\'m hooked!
I think that your writing styits its very well into these little one-shot excerpts. It tied in beautifully with the rest of your series, but stands alone quite nicely. I\'m also impressed with the way you write dialogue. these are great, I hope you continue to write a lot more in this vein- I\'m hooked!
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December 27, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. It was very good, an interesting plot and very well written. Good job.