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please continue i want to know what happens next.

You must be a huge fan of led zepplin, I like their music Kashmir is my favortie song by them.
both Jimmy\'s are/were good guitar players=)

I think he should tell Dumbledore first. After all if he tells minerva he\'ll still hafta tell dumbledore... neways I love this story so please update soon!!!

You ask so many questions, it\'s hard to remember them all for one review. First of all, I wish you would explain how he got pregnant. It\'s obvious Sirius didn\'t take a potion or perform a spell, at least on purpose. Is his father so cruel that he would use his son to try to breed a replacement he can be proud of? Any way, I think itimpoimportant information to add and I judge MPreg stories on how they explain how it is possible.

Second, I wouldn\'t put Lucius in, although if you pair him with Peter it would be an easy way to explain how Peter was seduced into joining Voldemort. However, it may be too easy of a solution and the plot has been done before. If you put him in, use him as a minor character as a means to tie things together. Too many main characters can sometimes ruin a story.

Third, I am curious to know if Snape knows his boyfriend is a werewolf. Has the Shrieking Shack incident already occured, is an event yet to come, or is this piece completely AU and it never happend.

In response to your last question, No, I have nevead aad any of your other stories but I might take a gander at what else you\'ve written after reading this one.

Ooops! I forgot one! I told you you ask too many questions.

Sirius should probably forgive James but James actions should make him somewhat suspicious. I would be. I would always be wondering if my man truly stood behind me as a supportive boyfriend should or is he merely watching my every move waiting for me to cheat. I think there will be some tension between them for a long awhile.

Please Please Please PLEASE! go on with the story! For the love of all things good in this world! I really like the story so please update soon! I really wanna kno what happens!

Blu~

Aww... that\'s really sad. Of course you should continue. And kick James in the arse.

Please update quickly. I know a lot of people get squicked by m-preg but personally it\'s one of my favorite story lines. I think it would be good to go into how Sirius did get pregnant. It\'s always interesting to read someone\'s take on it. As for Lucius being paired with someone...I guess I\'d make an OC. I really can\'t see him paired with anyone else. Not Narcissa. I like Lucius paired with a male. Keep up the great work and I love your story.

ok,i think Remus should have said arse, Lucius shouldn\'t be in it, I think Sirius should forgive James, and i think you should explain the pregnancy. is that all the questions? i also think it would be a well rounded story if severus came into the picture a little as well... mabey with Lily. Well, good chapter, i can\'t wait for your next one

oops, i forgot that sev was already with remus, nevermind that last bit, mabey peter and lily should go together