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Okay, I tried to keep a straight face but the part with Harry musing over Dracos `good genes

Score; people are reviewing. [.blinks.] Sorry.

I really love your story. I admire the fact that it is dark, although it kinda makes me worry for Harry and Draco. I hope you update soon, and if I can help you to brainstorm, please let me know.

ok, i think tyou you have a great idea here, and it is coming along well. the only thing that i could sugjest is to try not to say \"he\" as much as you do, because in many cases it is very hard to understand what the hell you are talking about. Throughout this story i wasn\'t sure if you were talking about harry or draco because you simply said \"he\". Aside from that, i can\'t wait till you write out who the mystry lover is, though i\'m guessing that it\'s seamus, am i right? well, update soon!

I thought this story was/is very good and I\'m enjoying reading it, please don\'t give up writing it. There are very few grammatical errors throughout, I didn\'t notice any spelling errors, which makes it a lot easier to read. It\'s interesting, and leaves me waiting anxiously for the next chapter. Good job and good luck =)

Hey ! Great story ! I\'m curious what you\'ll make of this new twist. M\'sure you\'ll handle it great ! Oh and, when Harry says \'j\'aime tu beaucoup, Draco\', it should be \'je t\'aime beaucoup, Draco\'. The \'T\' + \' are the \'you\' in \'I love you\'. I know it may seem strange though...well bye now !