rate_review Reviews

I love this story!! This is the third place I have seen it. I like the way you are slowly reavealing what is going on in the story. Some writers explain everthing in the first chapter and it really takes all the mystery out of the story. I hope you write a new chapter soon, I can\'t wait to see where this is going to go.

I really like where this story is going. I keep on reading hoping to find out what bloody is going on! But I have my own theories, which are probably wrong...but anyway enough of my incessaabblabbling. I loved the way you describe each character in the story...my sympathy is of course with Hermione, but the way you portray Severus, I actually feel the same about him. Look forward to what happens in the following chapters. Happy Writing!

Hi, Ive actually read all 4 chapters of yr bonds of duty, and i am really enjoying it. I really like the fact that you\'ve got character development, as well as story development and that the whole thing reads nicely, with detail, and sensitivity towards each situation. Long may this continue!
Reading from the UK

Luthien: you just left it there, huh? Left us dangling on the edge, mouths gaping, salivating like Pavlov\'s dog at the sound of the dinner bell.

:: bends Luthien across her lap and delivers one hard smack to the Author\'s rear, then several, each punctating her words ::

BAD AUTHOR!! Bad, bad author!!

:: smiles :: Alright, now that you have been punbished (and now that I have thoroughly enjoyed myself), please give us more...and soon.