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for What do we do now

by darc

person hermionebrowneyes
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i realy like your storys and i was woundering if hermione will be in this story and if so will she be remus child or maybe blasia(or how ever you spell your name) ihope she in this one
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens! I can\'t wait to read what happens now that Jocelyn and Lucius have met. This is a great story. Please update again soon.

Tiffany
person crissy
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lucius doesn\'t seem so sinister. i like that.
person ancientgirl
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating this. I\'m glad you are still writing it. I really got into yours story when you first posted it and its progressing nicely. I\'m wondering though if Lucius is a bastard in your story or if he will prove to be not so bad. I\'m also looking forward to Draco and Dylan becoming friends.

Please don\'t keep us waiting too long for another update.
person dave gerecke
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your formating make the story very difficult to read on my palm. the umber of blank lines is the problem. Could you forgo the double spacing?
dave
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can\'t wait to see what Joclyen\'s reaction will be. I love this stroy! Please update it! Along with you other stories too! I love them all!

Tiffany
person amethystangel
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like WOW! This has definitely caught my attention. But a comment for an A/N from an earlier chapter. Most 15 month olds do understand speech, because they\'re starting to put the words together for themselves. If they aren\'t by that age, they would need intervention for a developmental delay.

Keep writing and I\'ll keep reading.
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I love it! Update! Update! Up! I ! I especially lovd how Harry...I mean Daylan turned into a wolf pup. I love how you have managed to have Severus be in character and out of character at the same time. You are a wonderful writer! Keep up the awsome job you\'re doing!

Tiffany
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... please update asap! I love where you\'re taking this story... it\'s absolutely adorable! *grins* fluffy Harry...er Daylan puppy! *grins again*
person Hotarutomoe
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue