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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story it is good to read about Harry's younger life please keep this up and I hope you are going to update very soon.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update the story soon please i would love to read more
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the second of your stories I have read . And it is very good . I loved the way you
described how Daylan was sleeping in his father bed it was so sweet. I really hope you
keep adding to this story as well as you others. C.G.F.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just love it .. i hope harry and draco become best friend and i hope all going well for them ... please update sooon i would love to read what will happen next ... well bye for now
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, do Draco and Harry become friends? What happens next? Please update soon!!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that a five/six year old Harry/Daylan is just adorable. The fact that not all of the cannon characters are evil is a nice touch.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad I found your story. I hope you update it sometime soon. I love Severitus, and yours is delightfully inventive. Thanks for sharing!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, momma-dar! it\'s me! n0b0dys_ang31! I just popped in to tell you that the telepathy conversations have been cut from chapters 2 and 3. I had to double check from fanion,ion, and theere is a who lot cut out. Just thought you might like to know!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am SO glad to see an update to this story!!!!! I love the storyline and your whole alternate universe. Will you show us some Minerva-Lucius-Draco interaction also? Please update soon!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I wanted to tell you I really really love this story. But please you need to do something about your formatting. Your first chapter is formatted perfectly. You have your lines single spaced, you have your paragraphs separated by a space, its perfect. Why did you start putting a space in-between every line? Its doesn\'t flow well its a bit off putting. Sometimes people don\'t even put spaces in their stories, but this is too much. Please go back to your chapter one format. Your story will flow so much better. Even if the chapters seem shorter when you do that it doesn\'t matter, its a good story and people will still go back for theatesates.