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for Catching Fireflies

by PoisonedBlueberries

person ancientgirl
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say if anything I\'m curious as hell as to what Professor Snape is going to do to Uncle Vernon for calling him a freak. Sounds interesting though.

Maybe Draco and Harry can make the Dursley\'s life a livingl. l.
person sak
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This setup was well written in the first person. You introduce the characters and flesh out who they are before you put the new antagonistic elements into play. Please continue!
person becca
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don\'t leave us there! so far well written, and a good start. please, write on!!
person Anna
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep going, I love your begin! Yo! You picked a plot that is opriginal and could travel in many directions, and it is a a H/D fic... basically what more could I ask for? Keep going for the sake of my sanity, lol.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the begining looks great. I can\'t wait to see what you have planned
for the boys. Are they going to both be servants for the Dursley\'s? Is Draco
going to put the Dursley\'s in their place? Will the Dursley\'s be so outraged
that another wizard is living in their house that they go on holiday for the
rest of the summer? I can\'t wait to find out!
person Ivi
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, hello.

It was a very good start, regardless of its shortness. *grin*

I liked it very much; both the idea and your writing. Although it is not very original, it seems like a nice way to start a relationship between Harry and Draco. Also, your writing style is very fluid and doesn\'t let the readers get lost in between. Resuming, I liked every aspect of this fic.

Hope you\'ll continue. I surely read the next chapters whenever you post. By the way, can you email me telling me when you update?

Thanks,

Ivi.
person sindel
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it, keep going! :D
person Winterdragon
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a couple of things I wanted to say really. First off.. good start! Although it was short it was well and and I really rather enjoyed it. Secondly .. I have read a fair number of \'Draco goes to stay with Harry\' Fics and the greater amount can only be described as Crap. But this has a good chance of being something that will be well written and enjoyable to read. What are you plans? What is going to happen? Is it going to be slash? Friendship? Or are they going to end up hexing each other to hell and back? I, for one, cant wait to find out!