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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Believe me, I\'ve read a lot of those \"Draco comes to live at Harry\'s house\" type of story but somehow, this one is different. All I want to say is I love your story so please, update soon.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you could simply have the dream morph from a nightmare (perhaps the noise is what wakes harry) into a wet dream? Hell, a wet dream about harry would be a nightmare to malfoy *grins*
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Interesting enough. Keep going.
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. One of the better ones on this whole site. Please update soon as I would enjoy reading more of this. Thank you for posting it for everyone to read.
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m reading this. ^^; I think this looks like an interesting story, so far. Is it going to be a HarryxDraco fic? Oh, and if you\'d like me to beta read this story for you, I can. If you want.
~MaLady Molto
~MaLady Molto
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An intriguing beginning. : ) I would definitely enjoy it if you continued this story. I\'d like to see where you take it.
Kiri
Kiri
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Although this is a very short Prologue, I have to say it\'s a great start and very well written. How are you going to have them develop their relationship? Fights in the beginning and hexing each other into oblivion or was everything they had before just a big front that will be slowly broken down to show their real feelings? Gah. I can\'t wait to read more. Please continue soon!
-Ashleigh
-Ashleigh
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write well, but please do something about shortening the sentences and separating the paragraphs.
This is a plot that is quite commonly used and I ouwld love to see how you con continue to write it. PLease, for all our sakes, make it realistic.
Draco would not be tha same snotty boy as his parents have died regardless of his feelings towards them. And Harry...you get the picture..
BOTTOM!DRACO IF YOU PLEASE :D :D!!!
This is a plot that is quite commonly used and I ouwld love to see how you con continue to write it. PLease, for all our sakes, make it realistic.
Draco would not be tha same snotty boy as his parents have died regardless of his feelings towards them. And Harry...you get the picture..
BOTTOM!DRACO IF YOU PLEASE :D :D!!!
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like the idea you\'ve chosen, you know Malfoy staying with Harry. You should go on with it!! I\'m also new to fanfic, working on my first story. If you feel like it, send me a mail or so...Kizzezz, Miss HighSchool
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write.