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for Catching Fireflies

by PoisonedBlueberries

person Cordy
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I\'m totally in love with this story. What\'s taking so long to update though! Hurry please!
person Mar
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, such a good fic. I always hoped dudly would be gay. You made Draco act exactly how he should. I hate when authors make him all sappy. His evilness makes him sexy. Great job. Please update soon! I\'ve been waiting for so long for a new chapter!
person Anna
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I loved the snarkiness of the dear Proffessor and Draco, however it was a bit confusing when you changed perspectives. I would recommend sticking to either Harry\'s or Draco\'s P.O.V. and you said in the summary that it would be Harry\'s. I was wondering if you are partial to nick names for Harry and Draco? (I\'m sorry but I read one fic that ruined nicknames for me forever and I haven;t been able to stand them since). That\'s my two cents. Happy writing.
person alex
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is he going to sleep in harry\'s room? well, duh, i\'d say go for the wet dream... it would be best if the dream was about harry as well, just to lace it with good stuff... Heh.. heh..heh... ok, well, update soon, i enjoyed your story.
person Waywren Truesong
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... much as I adore the yaoi goodness, it\'ll be easier on Harry if we can force some sympathy, or even better, empathy out of him before we start whacking him over the head with Draco\'s sexiness. NOt that Draco doesn\'t do that himself as it is...
person Morgeth
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far. Sounds like a winner to me. Maybe a dream that starts out as a wet dream but ends up as a nightmare? That would be my suggestion.

Good Luck
Jessie
person passionatekisses
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story and I think its wonderful! Oh and about the Draco with a wet dream or nightmare.
Your right the wet dream would bring Harry and Draco\'s lust out of each other.
But with the nightmare...Draco and Harry will form a bond of trust.
person Temptation
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Default, why don\'t you combine the two? Have Harry wake up to Draco having a nightmare about Dudley putting the moves on him and Harry trying to calm him down which leads to maybe something good??? I just like seeing Harry\'s relatives getting their \"just desserts\".
Something semi-horrible (gasp) just occured to me - is it possible that Harry and Draco are somehow related since he has to stay there for the summer or is just the \"safest\" place Dumbledore could find to hide him without endangering the Order or is the Headmaster trying to play all knowing Cupid again? (I have some issues with that wizard - kind of reminds me of a Santa, Cupid, etc all wrapped together and thinks he knows best for everyone. Reminds me of a show from the USA called \"Father Knows Best\").

Either way, keep up writing, I\'m enjoying the story.
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok first all. love the story. second draco should have a wet dream, always time for nightmares later. once again, love the story keep it up. kudos.
PAP
person AngelFire
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gotta b wet dream!!!!
great story!