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for Marriage Law

by teshara

person naina
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleaz! pleaz! pleaz! PLEAZ REVIEW! I will die with out it! I begging you here pleaz?
person spaz141
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
person Alisha
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Just what is Peter planning...hehe...Please update soon! I lovere ire it\'s going.
person squibby
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic! The relationship is realistic yet romantic, in a slightly dysfunctional, boffinish way.

\"John Inman needs to be cast in HP4 SOMEWHERE!!!\" Sorry to tell yot Jot John Inman died some years ago. :(
person Estrilda
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, we need to know what he\'s planning - I can\'t wait. Someone has to push these two together. It\'s a little sad the parents are already gone sey aey aren\'t stuck sharing the bed again. Darn! Please update again SOON.
person mary
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Can\'t wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
person Hawklaw
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story that gets better with every passing chapter! I can never remember whether I\'m reviewing you here or at L&LS, so you may get two. Anyway, I like the way you are developing the plot, and your OC\'s in Snape\'s family are great. Looking forward to updates!
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I love the last couple of tersters. They are funny. Update again soon.
person Mel
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Teshara, I love this story but I do hope you reconsider the use of the word fanny. It is pretty much the British equivalent of saying \"he smacked her p*ssy\" and that sort of takes away from the tone of the story a bit, especially considering the context and setting which is irrefutably British. Cheers.
person Nancy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Story is good so far. I like it. But wher is chapter 16?