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for Marriage Law

by teshara

person GeekGoddess
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!! sorry...I little excited that they finally surrendered to each other.
person Redone
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute names for the house elves, Cherv and Sloozhanka :)
person Jenn
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good lord, that was amazingly hot. Talk about a sexual catharsis after all of that build-up you did. :) I certainly enjoyed it and would\'t mind hearing Severus Snape say, \"My God, I want to make you come.\" You know, fo sim sim simple line, you certainly know how to pack one hell of a punch.
person spaz141
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!! I guess an night of ballet and french food will make anyone randy. Thanks.
person Anonymous
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent! i loved it. really. one of the best fics i\'ve ever read and best yet, you have ore than one chapter! the begining was a little hard to follow but it was worth reading. thank you for taking time to write this and i understand what u mean about being abit excluded and embarressed when you say something that flies over people\'s heads.
kat
person Dr
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A virtual rose to you for rapid updating!

Love the new places you are taking us to.
person spaz
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Harry going to die? I\'m kinda sad. Hermione an amazon, now that not typical. Interesting, thanks.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! And we add more intrigue into the mix! \"Lovely,\" she says drily. (from a character type perspective. LOLOL) From a reader\'s persective it\'s a good thing. Can\'t wait for more. : )



Kiri
person Droxy
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so much. Itis a real joy to find stories I like being updated.
likelike some of the magic used in the chapter such as Sev peeling potatoes. I like the OCs. It is funny that Charlie gags when Sevs family says he is kind and a good guy.

But when is he going to kiss her dammit!!! You said these two \"had it bad\" and the relatives are working on it. Time to heat up the rrealtionship please!


LOL


person shaz
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story but sev and hermione need fat slaps in their faces and to realise they are lustifterfter eachother and are madly in love, the suspence is killing me, please keep writting more great stuf

hugs shaz