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for Marriage Law

by teshara

person WriterLady1031
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good last few chapters! That was amazing and I literally sat here in awe of the way the story unfolded. I\'m pretty much at a loss for words about the details and the characterization that was given in the last five five chapters. You\'re a good storyteller, hon. I\'ll definitely be back for more on this one. ^_^

Ciao!
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nir !ir !! You made me cry about Molly. She is the eternal mother.

*sniff, sniff*

Preparing mf fof for more.

Glinda
person Droxy
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Got Tom Leher on vinyl,a 1960s mono record.....

Smut is a great song.

Downloaded chappy to read later...
person ravendarkness
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff, sniff* where are my tissues?
person spaz141
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Somebody find Harry a good plastic surgeon, yikes, he sounds aweful. Great chapter. thanks.
person WizardingAngel
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no no no no you just did not leave it like that ................lol........................ I hope they make it through this............. keep up with the excellent work
person spaz141
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap and now for some action/adventure. thanks.
person Hazel
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that is one hell of a cliffhanger!!! Please write more soon :D
person sinj
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! Another cliffhanger... You better post the next chapter soon, you can\'t just leave us hanging in suspense like that! Great chapter, I like the way you tie in little pieces of info and weave them into your story. Keep writing and update as fast as you can :o)
person Droxy
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this imaginative story, and the new places we get to see. Points on imagry.

However I feel you may be getting razzed about Sev being a bit OOC. You\'ll need to snark him up a bit.

But that wont stop me from reading this challenge fic. I am interested in the story with Dumbledore more and find myself curious about that. The whole romance thing with Dumbledore could be a whole new stor
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