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I wish I had the artistic talent to illustrate the scene where Severus was miming hanging himself behind his mother\'s back. Priceless!

I\'m enjoying this story, but you should really have a beta to give your chapters a once over before posting. In the latest chapter you have Madame Pince as the Mediwitch (it\'s Madame Pomfrey), you have Goyle married first to Padma and then later to Parvati, and it\'s Blaise Zabini, not Zambini. I\'ve found other nitpicky little things in other chpaters, but I won\'t pick you to death here. Otherwise, good story. Will the Amazon prophesy come back into play?

Great! But just so you know you said Madame Pince was the healer and not Madame Pomfrey so you might want to go back and change it other wise this chapter was fantastic!

One question, did Greg Goyle marry both Patil twins? the little devil... Very nice, long chapter. I hope the do have a baby. thanks for writing.

This is a delicious story! Excellently paced and well constructed

Only one question - in chapter 20 you mention Padma Goyle then later Parvati Goyle. Did he marry both twins?

Whoh. Alright, I just discovered your fic and I have to say, I can\'t wait for chapter 30. Reading the chapters inbetween studying for my quiz (on a totally unrelated subject) was kind of weird, but also I strangely felt like I was getting quite a bit done. Multitasking taken too far, I suppose. At any rate, you write beautifully, and if you haven\'t figured it out already, all you have to do to erase a faux pas in your personal dictionary in Word is find the file that the dictionary is stored under (do a search in whatever folder stores all of the Word files used to run the program, and the dictionary will have some sort of sensible title, like \'dictionary\'). Open the file, regardless of file extention, in Microsoft WordPad - this is a very important point. Open it this way and you won\'t get gibberish. Do a ctrl-F search on the incorrect spelling and delete it. (The file should look sort of like a word document, but filled with random words with spaces inbetween.) Save the file and you\'re good to



Anyway. Back to the feedback. Wonderful! I\'d never thought of Severus as a disenchanted Russian Orthodox. Very interesting tact to take. If you have questions about it, ask. Theology and liturgy are something of a hobby, though I am admittedly not R.O., I have interesting resources at my disposal.

Very interesting chapter--I am really curious to know what else is in store for Harry and whether they will ble tle to fix his face. The part with Neville\'s grandmother was really awkward--I know that I wouldn\'t have known what to say either and I probably would have had a smile froze on my face just like Ron. Either way, I\'ll be back for more when you update!

Ciao!

interesting. thanks.

wow impressive chapter and I love how you described hair\'s eyes that was wonderful... but I also wonder if he can summon the dark mark a................... well hmmmmmmm we shall see......... ... any way keep up with the excelent work.

Great story